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L.T. on Jun 02 '08
This is attempt number two
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L.T. on Jun 02 '08
full view: http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=trytwopo9.jpg
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professorE on Jun 02 '08
I would like to see the bottom (maybe 1/3 of it) still encased in a block of granite, waiting to be carved out. It would give it more of a "work in progress" feel.
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L.T. on Jun 02 '08
cool idea. thanks much
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L.T. on Jun 02 '08
moar?
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L.T. on Jun 02 '08
??????
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L.T. on Jun 02 '08
lame
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faiz1984 on Jun 03 '08
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L.T. on Jun 03 '08
I can see what you mean about the crane, but I want the people to stay simple
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 03 '08
im still gonna say it needs moar stuff happening, i like the new background though
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L.T. on Jun 03 '08
LIKE WHAT
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L.T. on Jun 03 '08
More details in this presentation version
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 03 '08
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 03 '08
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L.T. on Jun 03 '08
thanks pagey
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 03 '08
you are very welcome
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L.T. on Jun 03 '08
bump it real good
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L.T. on Jun 03 '08
otra vez
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DefyAllLogic on Jun 03 '08
i like the idea but don't know how it would look on a shirt. i'll be back for v3
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Klenatron on Jun 03 '08
Put it on a shirt to present.
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L.T. on Jun 03 '08
basic placement or bottom... I'll post both tomorrow
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L.T. on Jun 04 '08
wawawiwa
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L.T. on Jun 04 '08
cool
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illdthedj on Jun 04 '08
bottom and a bit of wrap around would be cool
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illdthedj on Jun 04 '08
o btw i think theres only one f in SERIF
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L.T. on Jun 06 '08
i think you may be right
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OhBeau on Jun 06 '08
clever! I would maybe try to add a little more depth. I'd like to see it on the shirt as well.
any comments for mine? Jazz |
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illdthedj on Jun 06 '08
lol sup fellow typography nerd!
is that bodoni in the back? my ONLY suggestion now is....maybe Mrs. Eaves? just cuz thats my favorite serif typeface lol and for some reason i picture this looking nice on a white t-shirt. but the printed colors still the same. anywho.... hey mind taking a look at my works-in-progress? any comments appreciated ;p 1. LOLYENA! 2. COOL AS A... |
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shakethesheets on Jun 06 '08
nice... I like it as is
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stubby43 on Jun 06 '08
This is looking alot better still doesnt quite look like a factory.
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L.T. on Jun 06 '08
shakethesheets winz
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L.T. on Jun 06 '08
And it's not a factory
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Phiffer on Jun 06 '08
Very cool idea
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classicrockrox on Jun 06 '08
I like it, although it could use a little more detail.
Mostly, however, am I the only one that noticed that 'serif' is spelled wrong? |
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classicrockrox on Jun 06 '08
Haha, nevermind. Someone else already pointed that out.
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shakethesheets on Jun 06 '08
hey, thanks!
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mariow08 on Jun 06 '08
try posting it like this! with the panels of closeups and all
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kool idea.. lets see it on a shirt
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L.T. on Jun 07 '08
con placement
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L.T. on Jun 07 '08
yes sir
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L.T. on Jun 07 '08
hooray mysterious "submit it"-ers
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 07 '08
guess who
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L.T. on Jun 08 '08
which box did you check
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L.T. on Jun 08 '08
honeybunches?
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L.T. on Jun 08 '08
whos the dont submiter
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
moar?
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it's pretty cool man, a good idea. I might make the type look a bit more sculptural, and add a 3-d quality to it.
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maija on Jun 09 '08
I like the very basic concept--little people making type--but it would connect better with the sentimental typographers if they were working in a giant type foundry, casting a huge leaden 'h' as it was actually done in the olden days.
I would eliminate the greyed out truck in the background. It doesn't add much more to the concept and distracts visually. |
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
THIS COMMENT is a placeholder for xiv's comment which he put on my blog. he is #3
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
to be honest, I really like how it looks on the shirt. I know there are some problems that keep it from being worthy of the veterans, but I've worked really hard on this- harder than any other sub. For this reason I'd appreciate all honest crtitiques
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
There isnt much more I can do without starting all over
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grazinglikeacow on Jun 09 '08
this is really cool. :)
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
how about a chunk of "font material" uncarved on the left side of the right serif, and a worker with an eraser tool approaching it
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
thank you much, cow
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grazinglikeacow on Jun 09 '08
i don't think anything else should be added. I like it like this.
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CharlieArt on Jun 09 '08
I love it!!!
Please critique mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/22547/Bombs_Away |
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
i dont trust anyone when they say they love it if they follow it up with a link
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
There's only one thing i can think that would really make sense and thats the
" chunk of "font material" uncarved on the left side of the right serif, and a worker with an eraser tool approaching it" idea |
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Hi Beardy on Jun 09 '08
http://www.threadless.com/?streetteam=Hi+Beardy
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
just a little more advice prease i wanna sub this week
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L.T. on Jun 09 '08
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
last bump
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 10 '08
needs moar factory!
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_cakeface on Jun 10 '08
i like this alot! maybe if the h looked more under construction, with beams and whatever around it.
check mine out? http://www.threadless.com/critique/22602/a_robot |
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
hmmmm.... beams, eh?
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
so no to the eraser tool idea?
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
i quite dislike the crit system on this site. maybe i'll just sub it...
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Acheman on Jun 10 '08
I think it's nice. I agree that the silhouette trucks in the background are distracting and don't do anything. I wonder also whether it wouldn't be better on a different colour which contrasted more strongly with the 'h'.
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humbas on Jun 10 '08
Go for it! Looks awesome!
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
do you like it more with depth?
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
im gonna take that as a no and try to sub it how it was
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
yes?
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reamontime on Jun 10 '08
I like it not 3d
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
i figured since type isn't 3d...
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
back to v3?
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
yes?
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hannah.pia on Jun 10 '08
yes lol. nice design!
critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/22624/Offer_Your_Affections |
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
alright then.......
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 10 '08
who needs dimensions
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
where's the dood who suggested 3d anyway?
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
hey pagel Eddie stpd me and it worked for HIM! i think yous justa liar!
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 10 '08
oh, ok
is eddie and stp klutz? |
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 10 '08
and=an
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
no
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L.T. on Jun 10 '08
no= hell no!
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Pathan Nagel on Jun 11 '08
what?
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L.T. on Jun 11 '08
ok one more idea: what about the squares from pen tool handles all over the H to show it's under construction
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L.T. on Jun 11 '08
lame
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Quartzy on Jun 11 '08
i like. `_'
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L.T. on Jun 12 '08
so basically depth or no depth???
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L.T. on Jun 12 '08
the critique system here is so broken...
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Auki on Jun 12 '08
I think V3 is ready to submit. I wouldn't try pen handles since non-designers may not understand, but it's up to you.
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