id like to see wut it looked like on a shirt

Yeah, I'll post links soon.

Shirt:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2377/2528539274_a8239b6cbb_o.jpg

Bigger:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3130/2538949721_f533bde58d_b.jpg

Detail:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3047/2539775136_0bd562027f_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2237/2539779100_de06ac2560_b.jpg

de do

help me out a little?

Hey Malcom. I dig those clouds! I think the line work could be a bit stronger on your main characters. By "stronger" I'm referring to the thinned out style, I guess. It looks like you were going for a watercolor effect, tho, so I imagine you might be attached to that aesthetic, huh?

Hard for me to create these pieces that I feel are a little more abstract. Still, at least you've got one person's perspective!

Good luck, man!

Mind checking mine out?

Hard for me to *CRITIQUE, I meant. Ha.

Thanks for the suggestion. I kinda like keeping the lines thin. It's just part of my style I guess.

OMG! midnite bump!!!!!

WTF? two "Don't submit"!!!! Who did that?! I'm going to rip off their balls and eat their babies!

After seeing it on the shirt, I think the top right cloud needs to be removed as the collective of them starts to read as eyes and a mouth...though maybe that's just me.

I like the line work on the main figure, but think some of the ones on the girl need to be the same weight so she stands out a bit more from the background.

If you have a chance: thanks.

Hmmmm...Guess it kinda of does look like face.

Maybe I'll change that a bit.

Thanks.

sunday morning bump.

Freaky. but cool. Different.

might be a little too hardcore for this site though. I think you could give it a try, and if it doesn't work try somewhere else where the styles are 'darker'.

To hard core?!?!?! Goatse has been psoted on this site!!!!!!!! THAT is what I call hardcore!


lllluuuulz. Thanks for the compliments.

I'm thinking about just subbing this soon and seeing how it does.

looks great man!

Thanks for the support. There aren't too many people that seem to be into this.

Skeptical...

Fucking A!

I really like this! I love the clouds! I love the creepy guy! I would definitely buy this if this were a shirt.

How does this get printed?
Like...what kind of process?
Gradients?

I think my doubt is the same of others...
how to do this acqua efect in silkscreen?
it's not possible, is it?

This shirt saved my LIFE!

And I'm not being ironic!
(that wasn't ironic either)

It's oddly endearing; like you see it, scream, and run away, but as you're running, you kick yourself for not hugging it...

I'm not sure how the color smudges would print, other than that nice

please critique mine: Water vs Worm

quite good.....I must ask what the title means.....

The title means you are so late to the party.

lulz @ bumping this.

nice illustration!

i think the monster would pop more if there was some varying line weight....you might also simplify the design and just do the monster and the lady with no background

if you have time, critique mine please :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/34587/who_doesn_t_love_a_pun

LULZ!!!!!!!!!

this is just bizzare but I love the style..I wish I could watercolour like that

eww

you should really submit this

I like the style!

digging the water colors M.man B)

I like your artwork man. I assume you are within 8 colours. even though it is an accident the face in the clouds looks cool too.
I dont get it but hey, who cares.
F*k the "don't submit"ers. Do it.

sub it!!