bad idea?

without the title this design just looks like abstract shapes..

abstract toes maybe? hehe

bump

should i delete this, what do you think?

Delete it, I thought they were space helmets until I read the title.

haha, that's funny

I think the colors not the abstraction that make it unreadable as toes. If the pink toes or all of them had a lighter value for the toenail it would make a big difference. I wouldn't delete it just yet, I like the drawing and it has potential.

thank you, it took me a while to do this! I'll tweak them and resubmit!

why not actually play on the word jam, give them instruments like in a jazz band haha, that would be awesome.

maybe some should get polish. and hair...?

as is it's not translating for me either.

ok, thanks for all the tips guys!!

Ok, i made the revisions. What do you guys think?

lol, maybe a bit higher on the shirt?


please critique mine: Water vs Worm

Ok, maybe i'll raise it a bit.

It's missing something. What if the jaggedy one were just a little closer to the middle and was a different color...sticking out like a "sore thumb"...

I agree with putting it higher.

Help me on mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/23213/Sublimation_T_r_ee

Ok, revisions made and moved up more. Better?

What if you put a little band-aid on the "sore thumb" and moved him just left or right of center?