I deleted the old crit and am posting this one because it never would update a new version correctly. Anyway, let me know what you think. If you vote, comment.
Yeah, that's one reason I did it on red the first time. It saves a color and just cuts down on the massive amount of ink used. I used to do a lot of screen printing and those blasted inks can get pretty infuriating.
The baby is freakin adorable. I love the mohawk. The guitar looks fantastic, and the words are well done. The only thing I might do (might) is make the "to" a little more readable. But really any moron should be able to figure it out. I think this is ready for the SUBMIT button.