Run away!

exactly how i feel in chem class

critique mine?

I like the way you used the colors, especially the blue as the shadow. I think the table-monster needs more facial features, it'll make it more menacing as a monster. Thanks for the critique on mine, by the way. The irony is that the placement you had suggested was what I had originally but it got some bad reviews.

my science teacher in high school would've loved this. it's clever, funny, and has a nice 'sketch' feel to it... something that you would do in class in the margins of your notebook. have you thought about making the light blue a little more transparent? that might make it seem more like a shadow.

Reminds me of chemistry... I would wear this. I do think some angry eyes would make it better :)

i really like this. agreed about facial features though. very funny.

Haha this is very clever and funny, I'd totally wear it, but I agree with everyone else on the eyes, it needs more expression :) Thanks for the critique on mine!

How would you suggest the eyes should look?

the eyes could maybe be atoms.. like with protons and stuff.. or maybe i would just go with sum regular monster eyes..

crit mine?

You should make angry, angled cartoon eyes with furrowed eyebrows. Incorporate the lines of the table to give them some contour.

Now stare into his menacing eyes! I also fixed up his shadow to be more the shape of the monster.

this is pretty damn funny! this is totally just a weird thing that popped in my head whilst looking at it ... could there be a school bus down there? Just think that could be funny! Nice work =)

i agree with hippiekasey, add a schoolbus and i think you should add some splash of colours to the buidlings

If you're gonna say don't submit, at least tell me why -_-*

I added a moon as a light source and some higlights. I think it brings out the Feariodic Table much better from the background.

HA! Thats funny. It reminds me so much of my chemistry teacher. This is an interesting idea. Maybe you could have some destroyed buildings to show how fierce he is! It's just a suggestion. This looks good.

looks cool ! =)

Maybe work more on the people running

The color and the line art style are a bit weird, but I find myself liking them more and more. It is definitely a unique style that makes the design more interesting and makes people look at it longer.

It took me a while to get that it was the periodic table (I didn't read the title). I think a visual cue that stood out more would fix this. I think the best thing would be to make the table a lighter color and put the grid lines and element names on there.

I love the blue shadow, and each time I look at it I like the colors and the art style more and more.

Thanks for the nice comments people! Anyone else?

I like everything but the moon, everything is done in this "i drew this really quick style" (which I like, dont get me wrong) and then the moon feels too perfectly round, draw the moon yourself instead of making a circle in photoshop or whatever you did it in, other than that I think its ready to go. I like it the way it is, not everything has to have a perfected looking style to it, if it did then everything would look the same.

Add bubbles and/or smoke coming out of test tube and flask... I think being "chemistry" it needs more reactions like flames and explosions!

Take a little peek at mine!

I really like where this thing is going. I can't wait to see how you implement all the changes everyone suggested. Nice quick draw style.

i love this concept, its so funny.

I agree with Mr Rhabb, the moon is very nicely done but it doesn't fit with the rest of the style

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I like it! Very nice color combination !!!!!!!!


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