that bad..?

I can't say I like the black background on the natural shirt... And the heart is a little odd.

stick with dark color shirts for this - try some diff color combos on the design and DO NOT BLOCK OUT WITH BLACK



ps: just try changing the heart to something else, anything else



CRITIQUE ER

better?

could something be done about her hands?

Try another tee colour.But its better

purple ?

I like V2 and V3 alot, just fix the hands and I say you're good to go.

this is great, submit.

thanks =] its really nice to hear good things ,

I think you have too many colors. You can only use 5 in addition to the t-shirt color...

ho right!! i will chnage it =\

grrr... how could i forget................=[

way too many colours in this. rework it to use only 5 and try again.