current project..help me out :)

Make the guts look a little more "intestiney"! A bit more bumpy, if you know what I mean?

very nice . is it vomiting, or confessing?

hah! this is awesome!

see how it would look is the green spew wasn't to the right of his head.

well...take that little bit off, and keep the rest.



also whats with the faces?

i think you should go with some crazy line work just spewing out of his mouth instead in the pink and red shades and some of that geen.

the blobs were supposed to be various emotions that the monster is in fact "spilling out"....so technically they arent guts

what if the emotions were tangled or interacting? and maybe a tear or two would better convey the emotion. this is pretty good though , i'd fuckin wear this right now.

very cool art style, I like the design so far, but I feel like it needs more, like background or something



http://www.threadless.com/critique/21762/Good_always_wins

changed splash background and other slight changes

i'd still wear it. i really liked the other green splash. I think the image can be smaller on the shirt.

I like this one much better than version 1. Honestly, I can't think of a thing to change. Great job! I'd totally wear this.



Critique mine too please?