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Alright, made a few more changes..
let me know what you think... good or bad I would like to hear some comments. |
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... so you know back in art class where you show your teacher your work and he/she does not say much about it... that has always given me the impression it was unsalvagable...
anybody have any thoughts? |
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Thanks so much!
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bump
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I think it needs to have more focus on an idea. If the idea is Boo!, then it should be a punch line to that end. It could be funny or scary. The purple structure in the back has an interesting quality about it. Maybe try integrating that with a more developed figure in front and have the figure doing something more engaging.
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yeah, maybe so, thanks.
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49 days later
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I Like It !!! Nice illustration - excellent combination of colors. !!!
Please score and comment: http://www.threadless.com/submission/171272/The_Puzzle |
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i actually think that the purle shadows under the eyes don't look right... makes it look like he has 2 black eyes
check mine out please http://www.threadless.com/critique/25297/MR_Lizzy_Fresh |
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I just had a silly idea, and wanted to see if it was worth submitting!