The initial composition looks okay. But I think you need to play the clouds more dynamic. (ie the foremost layer of the cloud looks flat) You also might want to try other choreography for the guys. Btw whats the Chinese characters say?
So pls tell me why, somehow I dont feel the corelation between FREEDOM! and these 3 guys & the clouds. Perhaps its just be not being well versed with Chinese culture. But I just dont get the 'feel' of this FREEDOM. Nice compotision however.
Say "zì yóu" (zje yo) for "freedom".