what do you guys think, i'm open for any suggestions. hope you like it, i will have other color and placement options up on my page.

I like the black one

thanks, yeah me too.

I like the placement, the colors are good.
I would try to replace some of the REALLY random
stuff with something else like, other body parts maybe like...legs or feet...

oh ok, i can try that.

can everyone tell what all of the objects are? theres a key (off the screen), a clock, swim suit, an NC licence plate, a light bulb, a five dollar bill, umbrella, a cell phone, an arm, a fish, a book, a ball, and a tie.

check my profile for other color options.

should i change the objects to body parts? i was sorta liking the randomness of it.

thanks for your help!

i think maybe there could be one or two more body parts, but i love the random objects! and i love this on black with blue.

the one under the license place, i think its supposed to be a five dollar bill, i couldnt tell what it was until i read your comment.

I'm just never a fan of vomit designs.

That's my personal preference, though. They still get printed here, like that clown vomiting rainbows one, so I say go for it. :)

The "How Not to Get Eaten" book is cute. :) Maybe it could have a more concise and to-the-point title? "Surviving Shark Attack" or something like that, something that would really be published. Or even something more subtle like "The Study of Sharks"... showing that he's eaten some poor, naive amateur marine biologist. :)

thanks for the advise.. ill make the dollar larger, change the title of the book, and add more body parts.
thanks for the advise!

by the way it wasnt intended to be throwup, it was really supposed to be speech bubbles telling what he had.. but either way i guess.

i added a foot, changed the book name, added an anchor (keep?), and made the dollar bill i little larger...
what do you guys think?

i think you should flip around the umbrella because the handle kind of disappears in the speech bubble. but this is great either way, submit!

^ i AGREE...the items are much better!

this is not good vector tracing - sorry but the shark is poor and the concept is lacking - look at the printed shirts and see what I mean - go here CRITIQUE ER

so what should i do? submit this one as is or submit another version of a cleaner vector tracing and upside-down umbrella?

I think this is clean enough and I like the randomness. Submit only when there is nothing to fix because you might not be able to resubmit it later.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19963/Screw_This

I like the concept... but the execution needs some work in my opinion. I don't see why some teeth are coloured and others aren't. I like the items and the handdrawn feeling to them... maybe do the print a lil smaller? I'm not a fan of huge prints. But that's just me. :)

crit mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/19965/You_say_potato_I_say_tomato