I think the kid needs some work. I don't like the gray skin and her hair could use some work.

Yeah, I wasn't sure about the gray skin either.

I think this works better if the butterflies flight pattern spells out the "Phew part..."

The child also needs some work on her skin tones and hair...

The PHEW looks better

Question... when they take your submission and post it, but it's only up for a day and the time thing says "ended early," what exactly has transpired?