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BoxGirl
BoxGirl on May 20 '08
1 or 2 ???

wich looks better ?



FINALLY!!!

i finish this is my toco toucan t shirt(my first design), i was watching Discovery Channel and i saw one toucan [: and i really like it so i decided to do a t shirt with one on it, It was very hard to do this design because my computer is EXTREMLY slow it have like 50 MB RAM :P, maybe not 50 but thats how it feels, well at the end i really like it, hope you like it too. (:
thatoneguyjames
thatoneguyjames on May 20 '08
I'm not gonna lie, i couldn't actually see the toucan until i read your comment. If you want people to see the toucan, i'd go with one. If you want people to see a crazy design with a random black splotch that might resemble a toucan after you mention that it is one, then i'd go with two.



Critique Mine Please
BoxGirl
BoxGirl on May 21 '08
bold text ou theres only 1 ]:
BoxGirl
BoxGirl on May 21 '08
jajaja xD :P bold text

BoxGirl
BoxGirl on May 21 '08
Lokian
Lokian on May 21 '08
really like 1... not a big fan of 2 but really love the background color scheme going on in both!

nice!
Chevelle James
Chevelle James on May 21 '08
very creative.
heeping
heeping on May 21 '08
i like it cool
BoxGirl
BoxGirl on May 21 '08
heyy!! thank you all!!!! [: butt pleaseeee can you tell me wich looks best??????? 111111111111111 OR 2222222222222 ??????
trindli
trindli on May 21 '08
would the scribbles be over the whole shirt? and would the toucan wrap around? i like 1 more, but the toucan is much to big on the shirt, it would be lost if you wear it
Call_Me_Handsome
Call_Me_Handsome on May 21 '08
very kool!! Good job!
Dawndarkharp
Dawndarkharp on May 21 '08
I like V1 better. This is a really neat design! I would totally wear this. Way to go :D
Ehud L
Ehud L on May 21 '08
i LOVE the colors. and the black tucan really gets the essence of it's character from the movement and vibrancy of color. Is this a wrap around design? or just a front design? either way, I think the placement needs work. I'd make the color doodles smaller, giving more empty space on the shirt to help the balance of colors. I think vesion 1 is better but the tucan is still too big. I'd go for a bottom left placement.
roflwaffle
roflwaffle on May 21 '08
very interesting
suicideforabheng
suicideforabheng on May 21 '08
i love v1 better
bcrider
bcrider on May 21 '08
Definitely version 1; version 2 I had to look at before I figured it out. I'm a dork. I would totally buy this!!! Submit!
Wombatsoup
Wombatsoup on May 21 '08
I definitely love the color selection, but I get lost with the rotation of the toucan, had to look for a spell.



Version 1.
Le Dobermann
Le Dobermann on May 21 '08
lovely colors :P i would go for number 1

jpw5837
jpw5837 on May 21 '08
It's really cool. I like the colors against the brown shirt. The placement on number 1 is better.



if you get a chance look at mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/21170/Dorito_Girl

epocalypse
epocalypse on May 21 '08
go for it! this is cool. i'd say one over two though.
Mr. Raab
Mr. Raab on May 21 '08
the toucan is definitely too big, shrink him a bit on version 1 and you are good to go. I hope the colors wrap around the whole shirt because that would be awesome. I would it just for the colors alone, I dont ever care about a toucan. Maybe you can make one with a giraffe or a BATTLE SLOTH!!! that would be kinda nice to see :D
Fignewtonsunite
Fignewtonsunite on May 21 '08
v1!



the toucan seems too big or maybe if you moved the beak slightly it would look little better, but I totally love it!



if you dont mind, check some of mine out...



http://www.threadless.com/profile/396729/Fignewtonsunite/critiques
grazinglikeacow
grazinglikeacow on May 21 '08
I really like number one!

This is rally cool. good job!
Julri
Julri on May 21 '08
I really like it! I don't exactly like the second version where the design is vertical, but the first one's good. Maybe try another shirt color, too. The design itself is neat, though. :)
green_walrus
green_walrus on May 21 '08
I like it! Would the scribbles be on the whole shirt? You definately have an awesome idea! I think 1 would work better. With number 2 it took me a while to figure out it was a toucan. Go with #1
orangeblosm
orangeblosm on May 21 '08
nice and bright. i like #1 best.
CutieB
CutieB on May 21 '08
definately version 1
Lori_Ninja
Lori_Ninja on May 21 '08
Number one is better, i actually would love this better without the squiggles, or even if the squiggles were a little less bright, to make the black pop more.
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on May 21 '08
This shirt is very Threadless, I think! Unfortunately, I've only been here for about a week, so I'm still figuring out what that means. :)



The colors look great on brown, but I don't know how to critique the design itself. There are many much better artists around here that can do that, tho. :)



Good luck!
SamuraiSmurfette
SamuraiSmurfette on May 21 '08
I like this surprisingly well on brown
onionboi
onionboi on May 21 '08
i think i like version 2 better. good job
jayrawz
   jayrawz on May 22 '08
number ones kool.. maybe change the placement of the toucan tho?.. not sure.. i like it tho
motherleopardhello
motherleopardhello on May 23 '08
1 is better for sure.
NicolasM
NicolasM on May 23 '08
very very cool i love the idea and the colors. go with the first placement of the bird the other one is confusing. great job!
NZGfx
NZGfx on May 24 '08
I agree with most people #1 better shows the toucan, if you extended the black point at the bottom towards the beak more you may find it implies the form of the toucan better, if you want the toucan easier to see that is
crazy_itch
crazy_itch on May 24 '08
before i read about the toucan i though the eye was a big belly button! (number 2) for this reason id go with number one
3obz
3obz on May 26 '08
v1
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