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I'm not gonna lie, i couldn't actually see the toucan until i read your comment. If you want people to see the toucan, i'd go with one. If you want people to see a crazy design with a random black splotch that might resemble a toucan after you mention that it is one, then i'd go with two.
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bold text ou theres only 1 ]:
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jajaja xD :P bold text
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really like 1... not a big fan of 2 but really love the background color scheme going on in both!
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very creative.
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i like it cool
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heyy!! thank you all!!!! [: butt pleaseeee can you tell me wich looks best??????? 111111111111111 OR 2222222222222 ??????
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would the scribbles be over the whole shirt? and would the toucan wrap around? i like 1 more, but the toucan is much to big on the shirt, it would be lost if you wear it
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very kool!! Good job!
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I like V1 better. This is a really neat design! I would totally wear this. Way to go :D
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i LOVE the colors. and the black tucan really gets the essence of it's character from the movement and vibrancy of color. Is this a wrap around design? or just a front design? either way, I think the placement needs work. I'd make the color doodles smaller, giving more empty space on the shirt to help the balance of colors. I think vesion 1 is better but the tucan is still too big. I'd go for a bottom left placement.
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very interesting
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i love v1 better
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Definitely version 1; version 2 I had to look at before I figured it out. I'm a dork. I would totally buy this!!! Submit!
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I definitely love the color selection, but I get lost with the rotation of the toucan, had to look for a spell.
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lovely colors :P i would go for number 1
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It's really cool. I like the colors against the brown shirt. The placement on number 1 is better.
if you get a chance look at mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/21170/Dorito_Girl |
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go for it! this is cool. i'd say one over two though.
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the toucan is definitely too big, shrink him a bit on version 1 and you are good to go. I hope the colors wrap around the whole shirt because that would be awesome. I would it just for the colors alone, I dont ever care about a toucan. Maybe you can make one with a giraffe or a BATTLE SLOTH!!! that would be kinda nice to see :D
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v1!
the toucan seems too big or maybe if you moved the beak slightly it would look little better, but I totally love it! if you dont mind, check some of mine out... http://www.threadless.com/profile/396729/Fignewtonsunite/critiques |
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I really like number one!
This is rally cool. good job! |
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I really like it! I don't exactly like the second version where the design is vertical, but the first one's good. Maybe try another shirt color, too. The design itself is neat, though. :)
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I like it! Would the scribbles be on the whole shirt? You definately have an awesome idea! I think 1 would work better. With number 2 it took me a while to figure out it was a toucan. Go with #1
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nice and bright. i like #1 best.
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definately version 1
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Number one is better, i actually would love this better without the squiggles, or even if the squiggles were a little less bright, to make the black pop more.
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This shirt is very Threadless, I think! Unfortunately, I've only been here for about a week, so I'm still figuring out what that means. :)
The colors look great on brown, but I don't know how to critique the design itself. There are many much better artists around here that can do that, tho. :) Good luck! |
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I like this surprisingly well on brown
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i think i like version 2 better. good job
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jayrawz on May 22 '08 number ones kool.. maybe change the placement of the toucan tho?.. not sure.. i like it tho
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1 is better for sure.
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very very cool i love the idea and the colors. go with the first placement of the bird the other one is confusing. great job!
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I agree with most people #1 better shows the toucan, if you extended the black point at the bottom towards the beak more you may find it implies the form of the toucan better, if you want the toucan easier to see that is
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before i read about the toucan i though the eye was a big belly button! (number 2) for this reason id go with number one
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wich looks better ?
FINALLY!!!
i finish this is my toco toucan t shirt(my first design), i was watching Discovery Channel and i saw one toucan [: and i really like it so i decided to do a t shirt with one on it, It was very hard to do this design because my computer is EXTREMLY slow it have like 50 MB RAM :P, maybe not 50 but thats how it feels, well at the end i really like it, hope you like it too. (: