Here is the first color draft of the Russian Newborn. I deleted the first critique of this, because this is more finalized.

What do you all think?

hahaha!!! i JUST played with one of these dolls last night, no joke! i think this is pure genius

excellent

:)

thanks everyone, what do you think of the shirt on gold?

here are more options:

Other color choices

this one is great, ready to go.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/20690/King_of_the_hill

nice design...

submit..



CriTiQuE MiNe

Oh hell yes! I freakin' love it. I would buy it no doubt. C'est bon!

Great design!! Really love the idea!!

Maybe on a different colour and then I'll be happy to buy!

i like it in the gold a lot, but the crimson is also really cool. the design goes nice on all the shirt colors, though, which is a plus.

ahaha brilliant!

alright, thanks everyone.

i guess I have one more question.



i've always thrown 2 shirt colors on my submissions. is it better to have one shirt color already chosen, or could i put this design in the running with gold and crimson?

totally your call, but don't lose those russian doll color palettes. they're priceless.

ok, i was just wondering if it was better to have just one.

maybe i'll put both to see what voters think.

I would expirement with less colors. I would also like it if the baby was in the bottom half of the mother.



Please critique mine

this is really funny! I like the crimson shirt! I have experimented with showing a few color options and not showing them. I really dunno which works best though! Lately I have been showing just one option ...

if you just show one, what color are you going with?

its hard...but i think i'm going to leave it on gold.

i was comparing it to crimson up close and it overpowers the design.



i'll post them on a new version so people can vote.

i think this is great design!but are u sure the arm should be like matreshka-doll too?

the arm?

Cute! love it.

oh man i love it so much, so creative



http://www.threadless.com/critique/21125/Smiley_Mod

the pillow bothers me though, how it's line weight is so thick

yeah it is a bit thick, i'll change that, thanks for pointing it out.

thanks for the great response everyone, i'm about to throw it in the running, but I'd like to take a poll first.

for this version which color shirt does everyone prefer?

i guess gold. if you picked the crimon i think you'd have to boost the blue color because it's kind of lost and it all looks a little desaturated.

I love this so much. Clean lines, nice concept. A*. Defo buy it.

GOLD!!

That's really clever. The only thing I can think may improve it (and not necessarily) is maybe a bit of a background. Something very subtle would be fine.



Example

yeah i was thinking of a curtain and an iv

i'll test the water.

an IV is hilarious. also, if you get a chance, please check out mine. i want to get some opinions and suggestions.

hmm, it looked really cluttered, so i'm gonna leave it as is.

alright this is it.

pushed into submission!



:)

good luck!

my designs are taking a long time to get approved. :(

is anyone else having this problem?

i'm thinking its my computer.

oh... wait, sorry.

it feels like i've submitted this longer than 5 days ago.