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v1 Stop hitting me!, current version








Work in progress by:
The Results
Submit This!
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Needs Work
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Dont Submit!
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NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 18 '08
A redo of one of my first designs, which is now beyond recognition of the original but anyways...enjoy!
DrObvious03
DrObvious03 on May 18 '08
ah domestic violence, how cute.
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 18 '08
Sarcasm?
DrObvious03
DrObvious03 on May 18 '08
no i like it. It just makes me think of a wife beating her husband. and the poor guy cant do anything but ask her to stop, so sad.
DrObvious03
DrObvious03 on May 18 '08
yeah I have no advice on this one but it does make me laugh, keep at it
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 18 '08
Exactly, poor guy is pathetic...
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 18 '08
You know who I hate? People who check dont submit!!! Without a reason at least...
DrObvious03
DrObvious03 on May 18 '08
I concur, please add your insight instead of just dissing on it.
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 19 '08
bump
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NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 26 '08
Any tips on placement, color, anything? Been 8 days and no comments.
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 26 '08
Sorry, 6 days
Wozzy
Wozzy on May 26 '08
i think it needs alot of work
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 26 '08
Such as?
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NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on Jun 03 '08
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Vanadoss
Vanadoss on Jun 03 '08
she's hit him 12 times?

I don't know, yes she's throwing stuff at him and there's a score but beyond that this shirt has no meaning, he doesn't do anything, why? she's hitting him, why?

The pictures there but the shirt has no point tbh.

The score indicates that it's more than just a picture, but you don't give it anything to say what.

Dunno what to say to make this constructive, that's just what I think is wrong...
hannah.pia
hannah.pia on Jun 03 '08
I think it's better without the score, because the theme itself is about some silly domestic dispute; she's mad at him for something.
I like the orange colours but maybe on a more muted background it would look better?
NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on Jun 04 '08
Thanks for the ideas!
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