A redo of one of my first designs, which is now beyond recognition of the original but anyways...enjoy!

ah domestic violence, how cute.

Sarcasm?

no i like it. It just makes me think of a wife beating her husband. and the poor guy cant do anything but ask her to stop, so sad.

yeah I have no advice on this one but it does make me laugh, keep at it

Exactly, poor guy is pathetic...

You know who I hate? People who check dont submit!!! Without a reason at least...

I concur, please add your insight instead of just dissing on it.

bump

Any tips on placement, color, anything? Been 8 days and no comments.

Sorry, 6 days

i think it needs alot of work

Such as?

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she's hit him 12 times?

I don't know, yes she's throwing stuff at him and there's a score but beyond that this shirt has no meaning, he doesn't do anything, why? she's hitting him, why?

The pictures there but the shirt has no point tbh.

The score indicates that it's more than just a picture, but you don't give it anything to say what.

Dunno what to say to make this constructive, that's just what I think is wrong...

I think it's better without the score, because the theme itself is about some silly domestic dispute; she's mad at him for something.
I like the orange colours but maybe on a more muted background it would look better?

Thanks for the ideas!