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Great!
Hey! Check mine out too! |
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it's ok! Come and see my design!
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i totally agree with you. you might want to add on the top, dear threadless participants. cause if i'm not a threadless user, i would not know a shit you're saying.
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i dont think theres anything wrong with posting a link to your critique as long as you give a somewhat well thought out comment/crit to theirs.
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well, i just glanced over "UP FOR SCORING".....
perhaps that is in poor taste.....but if its UP FOR CRITIQUE, thats different i guess. are there like,unspoken threadless rules to this stuff? lol |
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check mine tooo!!
what do you think about myTee == Tree Of trees http://www.threadless.com/critique/22597/TREE_of_trees |
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There's a flickr group, I have it on my favorites at home, but I'm at school now, blog about it, someone should link you up.
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okay, now I an sooo confused. why is it annoying??? How else do you get people to look????
give it spin, would ja? |
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john- this is is a fine, respectful way to get his point across
i think this shirt could use puff ink, UV ink, superglow, gold and silver foil, and maybe some stickers and glitter glued on. |
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You should really develop a charming cartoony liaison to help the viewer maintain their focus through this difficult courtesy message.
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link texthttp://www.threadless.com/critique/21460/Liver_Fluke
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Now you need one for the recent crop of people that are linking thier designs and saying "Looks great, score mine".
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JohnFarallo on Jul 07 '08
maybey if you could make the model look like less of a "emo "son of a bitch. He makes me want to vomit with rage! Whats your problem? |
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Goooooooooooood point! : ) Hahahaha
Please take a look: http://www.threadless.com/critique/24905/Peace_Off |
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umm the text really isn't doing anything for this design.
vin! don't get your panties in a bunch. this is the internet. |
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maybe som shading. i mean...you only have one color so...you can def add some shadows. oh! and more mask...maybe like a big mardi gras mask with feathers. :p
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¡Im que dice a mi mama en usted para hacer un diseño trashilicious repugnante de mala calidad tan sucio que adoro absolutamente!!
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Hey... critique mine too?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25298/Happy_Thoughts |
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Leave a comment, without pushing your design or critique. If the person wants to they will go to your profile and look at those things.
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Oh yeah, make sure you're working with the shirt templates Threadless gives you. I say this because I don't recognize the white built-in-bow-tie t-shirt.
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Awe-wait-for-it-some.
Check this out, someone copied you! |
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This is pretty cool, but I think it's a little too similar to this design. Plus Threadless doesn't print political shirts.
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This Design is a Rip Off, See the original art here.
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this has has been done before! look here
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this shirt is kind of annoying, but on the other hand all of your other designs are really quite nice. i checked out your site and you sure are professional.
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Eh, designs are mostly about being a popularity contest.
Meh. I don't like to do it. But, its part of the game. http://www.threadless.com/submission/182420/The_Way_The_Sun_Hits_Her |
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Yeah, right on sleepy! home coming king & queen game around here, It kinda sickens me! But it's cool, the true artists will prevail and not end up selling there ideas to Mervyns next season.
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i dont think theres anything wrong with posting a link to your critique as long as you give a somewhat well thought out comment/crit to theirs.
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you a fagdizzle, just do people the favor and critique even if its just moral support. god damn
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if you must spam your link do it here
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hahahah, funny one, but that's a lot of text, and will have the "people keep making me stop so they can read my shirt" prob.. right?
But that's some funny sh*t, nice one! |
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I think you should try submitting it, who knows. As for the linking, :P I didn't realize, and I'll stop (just been here around 2 weeks, my bad.)
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Ellogoods on Dec 27 '08
Links are like little treasure chests waiting to be open. Goatse... 2 girls1cup. Indeed. Little Treasures. |
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i think you could choose a better typeface. something more timeless like bembo or baskerville. The leading is too tight for this to be a pleasant read and the tracking could use some work. also, i think the centered type shows indecisiveness. maybe justify it all so that it take on a rectangular shape. this will let you play with the placement a bit more and maybe create a progressive relationship between length messages. hope this helps. can't wait for v2! thanks for stopping by!
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I completly agree with visualinguist. Your tee is worthy by reflexion. You should work on and try to develop your idea graphically.
By the way, do you wanna express something on my work? |
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I was about to comment on this practice, but I wasnt sure where to put it - didnt want to stir up a shit storm in someone else's critique blog, lol.
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yea sorry but after a week of no votes i had to start doing something right. but umm as far as this piece i have to be straight up and tell you i dont like it, maybe with a fancier font lol
check out mine pls, thx: Organic_Nature |
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I understand if people don't give any advice and post their link, but I always try to help out. I scratch your back, you scratch mine.
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if only they would listen. Oh and posting a link to your design in scoring on someone's design is tacky as well.
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http://www.threadless.com/profile/853669/Brightwood/blog/431107/Advise_me_oh_wise_threadless_alum_and_longtimers
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I don't like his facial expression and the font choice is poor and black type on a white shirt? come on, where are the rainbows and technicolor rain coats??? hahaha
If you get a chance I'd love some feedback. Lamb Shanks :D |
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its not tacky to request input its tacky to try to enforce some some douchey made up pop-edict
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I tried to get people to critique my work without linking for a couple of weeks and got nada from folks even though I add critques all the time and many people take the advice to make their drawings better. So Screw this shirt. Gotta pimp yourself.
Please Critique |
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Wait wait who's being rude? you could nicely mention whatever is wrong but this shirt please. Some of us are new to this shit so now don't meant to be rude but f*@$ off!!! Mr I make the rules.
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I don't post any in submissions, only critiques, and I ask hosts before put a link in their blog. you should really submit this and see what happens. and since this is a critique I'll put this here
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OK sorry i want people to check out my design... man i should really just not tell anyone, yeah that will get people to vote for it.
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All designs get votes, all of them, and posting a good design gets you a much better response than spamming.
Use the time you would have spent spamming in drawing/designing, much better invested. |
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I'm so tired of these fucking spam whores
the last time I called someone out they goddamn starting posting shit on my old subs just to be a cocksucker... |
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I'm not sure it's an official rule.. but I won't do it again.. please don't spam my tees though in the future.. I understand what people think of it now! I got anoyed when someone did
Nice, now look at mine on mine - just linking here.. so I get how poeple react.. But I didn't put as short responses as that, and I voted with nice points (on the ones I liked ofc) as a kind of retribution.. But won't happen again though.. An idea is if people get bugged by it - make it an official rule - talk with the staff about it. I'm sure they'd go with it if there was an consensus on it.. Peace. Now look at mine!!! |
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i think its ok to post a link for a critique. why not??? this section is for users to see your design and comment which is very helpful before you submit.
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The trouble is, this is an unwritten law, which those in the know love enforcing on those that are less learned.
P.s. better without the text! |
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apparently theres no statute of limitations on critiques? so there are all kinds of critiques from like 3years ago, still floating around? craaaaaazzzzzy. and thanks for the laugh :)
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thanks for the heads up, my apologies
the comments were meant in sincerity but i was trying to be brief. I'm new at this so I hope not all is ruined. |
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i understand your message, but if this ever got printed, and anyone actually wore it, no one would understand what it means. no go.
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forceofvolcanos on Apr 24 '09
i understand your message, but if this ever got printed, and anyone actually wore it, no one would understand what it means. no go. Newbee, be gentile tory. |
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I haven't laughed that hard in a really long time. Thanks forceofvolcanos I needed that. Oh you were serious? Yikes!
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genteel |jenˈtēl|
adjective polite, refined, or respectable, often in an affected or ostentatious way. as opposed to : gentile |ˈjentīl| adjective 1 ( Gentile) not Jewish |
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^There's so much people that have done that stupid thing, I can't really comprehend what they intend with it.
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COOL got a sec?
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i often wonder if comments like that on here are meant as jokes
or if it's a prime example of people completely not paying attention to critiques when they post links |
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maybe iy is time for a second version?
That would save me the Long Long, long ,long looong long long Scroll down each time. Maybe add some color and gradients. Arrows would also do nicely. |
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That was way nicer and more helpful than leaving vaguely bitchy comments in the comments section of my design (which in my opinion is WAY ruder than what I did).
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would u check mine ...
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Check out mine!