I tried updating my design and adding a new version and I totally screwed that up, so I'm just making a new post of the updated design. The shadow is closer in than it was and the whole image is smaller. Any other suggestions?

thats really cool, I cant really think of anything to improve this.

Any other ideas?

I really like it, the only things I could think of would be to narrow the eye (unless it's meant to be a very strong stare) and move the central part of the eye up a bit, but I actually like it in the middle...



The shadows are good....

Anybody got a moment to critique mine?

Much better. Tilt to the left a bit.

Please critique mine

bump.

bump.