Any thing i should take out, change? thanks :)

I love that illustration! I feel like maybe the t items in this design need to tie in together visually?

Yay! Ghostbusters! Try tying the design together more, the before and after should be more prominent. Cheers!

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Thanks guys i totaly agree it needs to tie together! I originally doodled the idea with a guy opening the fridge, sketch here. I removed him as i felt he was kinda extraneous to the overall design. Ill post a revision up asap :)

ooo yeah that sketch looks awesome.

From original sketch... kinda thought it was too much

Way too busy i think...

My favourite, let me know what you think :)

i like it, but i think it needs something elce, just looks like something missing, but i do like it

maybe just make it a bit bigger but this is hilarious

yeah bigger on the shirt! I am stuck between v2 and this one!

Me too! Thanks for the feedback guys! Its quite a high res file so it'll scale nicely on the tee. Gonna sit on this for a bit before submitting.

I like how you tied it together! I STILL think that the MATH is really funny! Maybe put the math on the front and the fridge on the back?
It's getting there!

I love it. try flipping the whole image horizontly and slightly bigger.
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this is pretty awesome already, but i'm sure you'll find some way to polish it a bit.

i really want this shirt.... if this doesn't get picked then they need to turn off the internet.

I like version 2, good work.

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I like how you tied it together! I STILL think that the MATH is really funny! Maybe put the math on the front and the fridge on the back?

Is that the Ghostbuster movie monster the 1 that were some kind of dog and 1 of them came out of the refrigerator?

yess haha i think this is great!! like they said, needs to be bigger...take up the whole front maybe? hmm..or maybe some food splotches like stuff fell from the fridge...

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This is very cool, best version so far! Perfect as it is, can't wait to buy it...
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wow haha. this is good.
maybe a little bit bigger on the center though?
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Over I dig it. Maybe move the red burst to the top left so it looks like motion from the force of the door being opened. I feel like the "diet calculation" on the bottom doesn't need the burst as much as the monster opening the door and will look just as good without.

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I really don't have much to say about this one other than make it bigger, I really really like it though.

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version 2 ! on a white or gray t-shirt

definitely bigger - with the math on the back.
or - maybe - would the math be able to fit into the bottom right shelf on the fridge door somehow, to incorporate it into the main picture? figures instead of condiments type of thing? this could be a stupid idea tho'.
love that this is scares me a bit.

What a rocking demon!!!
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lol crazy idea,, still i would say,,,, fridge plus monster equal thin guy only i see fat on at first it soo much, its like 1+2= etc beter

acualyyyy i like v3 why not? why removed the guy? and try it on dark color! sth like navy blue even black is too mush its give nicght effect on navy blue and it will pop and do some hmmm sexi light of fridge or maybe in small tiny halftones!