comments please

don't just tick a box!

the legs on the geese look like they might snap off at any given moment.

i dont know how many people will get this, though.

i wasnt aware of what goosing some one was until i read it in a book- but that could be just me.

i find it disturbing that the girl's silhouette has no feet, and the boy's are triangular.

i'd like to see this progress, and i think you didnt fill in the loop of the 'h' in "pinch"-
it's still white.

:)

woop, :-)

it was a quick thing i threw together.
I'm not sure peeps will get it either

thx for the comments :-)

hahahaha - I love it renfrue - it really should be vectored crisp or rastered out all detailed and stuff. but def keep with the concept

BTW - i totally think goose when I pinch butts

cleaned up a bit BUMP

v2

whats up with one of the ducks head being blue?

also , maybe try drawing it as she is getting goosed - maybe she is surprised and hopping a bit and the dude has a hold of her rear

Where I come from, being goosed is when you get punched by a fist with one erect knuckle, right in a muscle.

Isaboa, it's a mallard (green headed)
& I'll try that suggestion

mezo, where r u from?

v3 excitement!

goosed!

still rough...smooth em out and walla $5

ahahaha :)

I think if you keep it like silhouette shapes, you need cleaner vector lines.

from a color blind person's perspective, i cant see the second duck's head (well i can, but just barely)

good to know, thx Frank

^ agreed - do you have illustrator? or a vector program?
I do like the lady being surprised

no vector program :-(

i'm in photoshop

thats OK - put all your silhouettes on a single layer and color select then smooth out the selection - You may get it more crisp

i'll give it the ol' college try

thx :-)

i don't get the blue head on the duck. Otherwise i like it

it's a mallard

people just weren't digging this idear

I agree with those who dislike the mallard duck head.

1) It is difficult to see.
2) Your original design had a bolder, cleaner style with two identical ducks. The phrase is "duck, duck..." and the repetition of the same word is reflected in the repetition of the same duck.

I like it with no text. You have created a clever visual joke and the more subtle, IMHO, the better.

lolz, i got reminded of this for some reason

;) for some reason...

this is the proper way to do duck duck goose..

also, it's nice to see Benny in the blogs

Just so you know, Photoshop can do vector graphics. Use the pen tool. Try to draw two different ducks instead of just copying and pasting, makes it look more interesting.

Critique - Light Discrimination v6

hay thx Nelson
there were so many don't submits i abandoned this

i'll check out ur crit

haha

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