I agree, I like the first one better too. I really like the idea and I think it is well executed. My only complaint is that step 1 and 2 are very similar, just shifting a few things around. Maybe come up with a different step 2? Still something very simple, like maybe one foot and a hand print and nothing else just to distinguish it from step one.
I actually wanted the 1st 2 steps to be very similar and very basic so the gap with the 3rd one would be that much striking. But maybe I should try something with a lateral movement....
I wonder, since you went with the very textbook feeling arrows, which I like by the way, should the rule/line below "How to BreakDance" also be more textbookish instead of hand drawn? I think this could work either way and is a 5 in my book.
You must have some very sensitive ESP powers because I was actually wondering how to design a line that would look both Schoolbook-like and a liitle bit worn out at the same time. Still working on it.
I think the only thing you might want to look at is the smoothness of the edges on the foot/hand prints. If you look closely, they've got a slight case of the jaggies. If you fix that, this design gets a 5 from me :)
Actually, That was done on purpose. I wanted the thing to have some kind of an "antique" look. But if it's not working, I'm gonna try to clean it up a bit.
Le Squale on May 13 '08 
