3colour Design, Prolly be quite good for a Kids shirt

nice stars
the star/flash on the lower back fin seems too bright to me
maybe put it on the top fin?

and maybe you could have a planet below??

I really like the style of it, and everything you have on it now is good, but it just seems like there isn't enough going on.

Maybe take Donkeykin's idea and put a planet below with a little alien kid controlling the rocket with a remote, like they would a remote control car or plane or something.

Its a good base it just needs something to make it stand out and bring interest to it.

Exactly what they ^ said. Shadows and highlights are mint.
Also, my eye is drawn to the cloud before the rocket... something else in the foreground might even it up and draw the initial glance to the rocket.

i think its really cute!! but maybe it needs more stars??

What do people think about a sexy space girl riding on it?

Just testing the water as I have one half made I was going to add in.

I have added a planet and a few more stars.

Oh my goodness!!!
Add a pinup girl and I might have to marry you!

This is such a gorgeous design! I love retro anything, and this certainly has that flare!
You have an amazing style! Keep it up! I'd love to see more of your work!!!

Funny you should mention that, I have a girl Im working on.
I just havent got her finnished yet.
Thanks

nice.

submit it.

Yay pinup girl!

Oooh!!! I can't wait to see her :)
I'm in love with pinup girls -- I am one!!! :D

Ooh, very nice. Love the color and the style. Really cool.

Radness, what do people think about straightening up the shinny stars? at the moment they a little squew-wiffiy. Do they need to all be straight up and down?
(My Girlfiend thinks they do)

really like it [:

I think they'd be nice if they were all straight. It gives it a more retro feel if they were straight.
I like the idea of shiny ones :D

hey really nice design!
I like the non-straight stars... you could straighten them - or - skew them even further - so it looks more 'skewed-on-purpose' than 'accidentally-un-straight'.
Oh, and definitely add a space-girl!
;)

nice retro feeling! a pin-up girl would fit right in!

wanna crit my shirt ?

it's just three colours right? looks awesome!

I'll click submit this but I wanna see a pin-up girl on it :)

Very nice!
Go

Yeah definately add the girl!

Don't add a girl especially siting on the rocket. Seen it a million time!!!
Add a bunny or a mouse. Anything but a girl. How about a Gnome! A Gnome in a spacesuit.

Gah, your a Gnome!!!

Yup 3colours.
sorry that its taking a while to finish, I have a huge assignment due start of next week, then I might have some time to spend on this.

Ok, how about adding a flying monkey?

... or maybe glitter for the stars? Looking good so far!

Take a little peek at mine!

Gahahahaha, touche.

it rocks but i think there are too many stars...it looks almost glittery...i.e. a chick shirt

I like it! :)

Here is a little teaser for all...

How did this go from a rocket to a girl? x) unless this is an extreme closeup of what was added to the image?

Fine observation, it is a SUPER extream close up of the unfinished pin up girl that we have been talking about in previous posts.
I felt I needed to put something up as I hadn't for a couple of weeks
(dam homework taking up all my time)

I like the shading
and her eyes
where exactly is she going to go?

I see, can't wait to see the addition :]

yeah, I want to see the rest of the pic.

She will be riding astride the rocket (see V2).
I when she is more finished I will post her properly

Looks good - perhaps adding a little more liveliness to her eyes and expression could be good. After all, I think riding a rocket would be pretty fun, but shes got something of a, "yeah this is alright, I guess" look on her face.

awesome, i will def. try

Change the expression on her face to something more lively and exciting. Other than that, it looks great. Cant wait to see the final product.

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I liked the rocket, but I'm confused, is this a new submission?

Please critique mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/22547/Bombs_Away

Nope not a new sub, just a teaser of a new addition, enjoy

Here is the completed rocket sub, complet with rocket girl...finaly
enjoy

cute. maybe make the "o" cloud bigger


http://www.threadless.com/critique/23987/Internet_lovers

ahh yes, the lossy compresion artifacts relly set this one off, dont you think?

it's cute but..
the girl seems a little off to me

i like the design the girl should maybe sit a little bit more back or forward on the rocket please crit mine too http://www.threadless.com/critique/23988/Society_Prodigy

her breasts are not vintage.

hmmmm

i heart boobies

Yep, bigger "o" cloud and although the design and the details of v. 3 are awesome, I think she doesn't look as relaxed as a vintage pin up should look like though I don't know what exactly is wrong. Try a slightly different pose and / or face expression that might help.
crit mine if you want to
http://threadless.com/critique/23562/choose_wisely

I think I'm actually more fond of Version 2. I like the girl, but I think she feels a little out of place.

yea shes not blowing my mind as much as I thought she would

she has no nipps, and i reckon she'd be straddling the rocket instead of riding side-saddle. like that she's looking at the viewer.

Straddling hmmm sounds good

well i think riding side saddle is more feminine like. just my 2 cents :)

Yea my initial thought behind the side saddle was it was more feminine, and classy but she looks quite stale

stale like a 3 day old cracker

lol i agree with the riding the rocket instead of side saddling x)
and the cloud should be a bit bigger
i lke the colors though and the placement x)
and yes side saddle is more feminine but she's a ROCKET GIRL 8D
PS. Critique my designs too (:

the whole design is good but the girls' placment is throwing it off. i think you just go with the straddling idea, and i also agree the make the cloud a little bigger

rad, concencious seems to be on the straddle and make the cloud bigger.

Hey wait a minute!...why am I getting all these "dont submits" if the comments have been telling another story?!

hehe, perhaps go crazy and put a saddle on teh rocket :P

^ ooo - you could get a rocket rodeo theme on the go...

maybe make the "O" cloud a heart shape (which would also be placed on the heart of the shirt wearer)

Hehey!! Now were talking. there are some awsome ideas here... I was starting to get quite dispondent 'bout this one

Air: Surfing on a rocket :) :) :) I also agree on riding the rocket. Try it, might get interesting :)

Please score:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/168262/The_Green_Cat

could yu make it so she's not sticking out her chest so much? it makes it look kinda awkward...straddling the rocket would look a little better 2 & definitely make the O cloud bigger

I fixed a few things :

1. Made the cloud a little bigger (but not to big it looks over-powering)
2. Brought the girl foward a little and fixed up her facial features
3. And made her stradle the rocket as a-possed to side saddling
4. Tweeked a couple of stars

I am alot happier with the overall thing now, She looks like she has a little more pop now.

her face definately lots a lot better... its a better expression

crit my design :]

YAY!!!!
Did anyone see that sign eye test design... that was great!

hmmmm...im hungry...mite get somthing to eat,
While im gone you guys comment on my design k?

ok i like my kind of design.
comment on mine too plz

eh?!

Hows It going????

i'd fix the boobs.
angle them a bit. they look like they're facing me.

Rad, I just had a thought about a slighlty different posse... have her leaning foward more and holding on to the rocket in front of her-self.
cuase she still looks a little off

yeah that would work better i feel.
here. you could use this as a reference, and for good music.

:P youtube embedded videos doesn't work.

here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dr4fP9A3Oi0

What a phallic video. Musically not my cup of tea but that was defiantly what I had in mind for the posses.
Thanks mike

I like the style and colours - retro 50's.