What do you think about this one? It is a little joke about LEGO and the Tolkien's character Legolas Greenleaf.

Thanks in advance!

Critique it!

as a huge LOTR fan, i must say that this is AMAZING! plus, the design is awesome too. you should totally submit it.

good work! good luck!

Very cute, much luck to you!

please critique me http://www.threadless.com/critique/20451/Human_Footprint

The perspective from the floor and the rest of the figure looks off in my opinion. Also, you might want to make sure that all the lego pieces are actual replica pieces that they have. for instance, i'm pretty sure they dont have a slightly dilted single digit black lego piece like the one you have at the top of the bow.

I like the idea.

thatoneguyjames, this piece has 2 digits, right? I will do it without the slightly dilted and preserve 1 digit. 98% of the pieces are real, i used several pictures as a reference. But i can't say that i'd expected it to look like a replica, it's an illo and not a photograph. And i think everybody gets the message looking at figure don't they?

Actually I know the floor perspective isn't great, i will redo it and add shadows! Anything else to add? Thanks for all the help!

Center it an it's ready to rock!

good work

today i was watching LOTR 3 :P ou poor smeagol ]:


oooo and i would like it better if it has the name written like in the tittle LEGOlas [: obviously with legos too



if you want please critique mine too [:

Thanks! Tomorrow I will post another version!

Wow. I know at least two people who would buy this the day it went up.

cool yeah I agree with frickinawesome ... Center!

Really clever idea! I don't know about centering it - I like how there is space for him to fire his bow - but I definitely think move it up the shirt!

perspective

I like it. Avoid using 'Lego' though. :(

heh, this is pretty clever.

Critique mine please?

Thanks guys, I'm working on a different version and it's almost done. I think it's pretty good! Stay tuned :)

Awesome. I really don't think it should be centered. It's more stylish this way.

And I don't think there's really a problem with 'Lego,' is there? I mean, the character's name really is Legolas.

But whatever.

I think it's beautiful. But without the text, I wouldn't get that it was Legolas. Looks a little chubby, somehow? Also, I would agree it seems a little to visually "heavy" for a corner print.

Good luck with this. :)

New version. I added the Legolas horse, (Hasufel i guess), shadows, changed some colors and the LEGOlas writing is now made with legos and it looks more... stylish?

Questions? Oh, yes:

Brown? Green?
Placement?

Please, help me with this one, i think it's almost done. What do you think?

Good grief, you've got skills. Very unique. It's a little tough to see the shirt placement, but I love it on both colors. Not sure if this is something I'd wear yet, but you've definitely got a $5 from me. :)

brilliant, no more owrk needed id say!!

When we can see the shirt placement, I can tell better, but I think the drop shadow might be a bit much. Hard to say from this view, tho.

clever and very well done!

I'm not sure you need the large shadow, as it pushes the image unnecessarily to the right. You could make the shadows more angled so that they are shorter...otherwise, great job on the detail and colors, I like both options, with the brown better. This could score really high, based on past Lego designs (the good ones anyway).

It's really well done ^.^ I like it on the dark brown. For placement, either in the center I'm thinking or maybe in the bottom right corner?

Looks great!

jaywalkergraphics: you can see a large preview of the placement here:

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1129/placementgs9.jpg

What do you think?

dacat: i'll try to make another halftone shadow. Maybe a solid shadow?

Brown is my fave :)

Thank you all for the nice comments and help! I can't wait to put this into the running!

IcyPanther:

For placement, bottom left corner is better isn't?

You know, I don't think it needs it, rodrigo. Honestly. The line work is out of this galaxy. Angles are perfect. No one will have trouble placing it in space without the shadow. Also, I think the center placement works great. It's a design that does not require added interest [i.e. shadows, unusal placement].

Whatever you think, tho, man. Just my $.02. Great work.

I agree, no shadow is needed, it's got enough detail and 3-D effect

Was the horse addition really necessary? I agree with what they said about the shadow. But so far it's a very unique idea.

love it. i prefer the green.

awesome design... looks like it took awhile.. i would luv to see one of a skull and sum roses.. dope design

this is marvellous... you've so got a winner here!

Jay's right that it would work without the shadows, but I think the halftone shade is so cool you should keep it... but maybe you should add a version without the shade so we could have a look.

crit mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/346777/Who_s_the_Pope_Now

I will add another version without the shade so you guys can have a look.

Thanks you all for the support, i REALLY appreciate this :)

hhahahahahah nice one!

The design without shadow. What do you think? It's done?

Thanks in advance :)

You would get more votes / impact if you used the full 640x800 height of the submission. You've got so much detail, show it off in a big image :-)

this is super (looks good on all three shirt colours too).

I agree with dacat about the submission format, although sometimes i miss the old skool smaller size :P

that's so rad, SUBMIT! :D

Dacat & opifan: I tried to submit in full height (640x800) but the image appears flattened/squashed, i don't know why :/

Thanks for the support, you guys are awesome!

beautiful. submit it.

SUBMIT!!!

This turned out beautifully, my friend. Mind having a look at my Lollapalooza submission?

This is a freaking KO, my friend!

A word about submitting: If you know your dimensions are correct, even if the preview looks squashed, submit it. Must be a T'less bug or something, but happens to me all the time in later critique versions. The image will look fine on the site.

Good luck!

shirts like this i typically dont wear...BUT NOT THIS ONE....I LOVE IT! submit it!

mind having a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/21763/Psychedelic_Snail

Thanks jaywalker! You saved my life :P

this is pretty sweet, definitely go for the submission

This makes the nerd in me very happy!
I say submit, but definitely show the design larger!

Very cool idea!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/21814/Memento

only thing i can say about this that might need werk is making the werd las more ledgible.. the "a" sort of gets confusing but its dope

eee!!! so cute :)

I'd buy it.... wonderful work!

i agree the "A" looks more like an "O" to me.
love it on green

You got it, buddy.

really well done

:)

Noice.

Submit!

sub it :)

ops... there's something wrong here...

isn't LEGO a registered/copyrighted name?
I once read you can't use the name without permission....

Fixed.

Another version. Now, i think it's ready to go. Hard work on this one :)

awesome.. the A looks much better now.. sub it..

crit mine?

I'd still $5 it, but I preferred the old "A". Great work, man.

Wow! Please sub it!

This is a lot of fun!

yesss brilliant. you've come such a long way and did an incredible job :]

look here please!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/22750/Airplane_Parts

clever!

this is cool and fun!

This is awesome!

awesome idea man. great work. i like it, but the only thing bothering me is the fact that i can't see the bow. it's mixed in with the horses mane.

check this out.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/23056/tape_fixes_everything

Thanks guys, but Threadless declined this one.

"The Threadless staff has provided a few reasons for declining your submission:

1) Your submission was declined because it contains copyrighted material. Pop-culture inspired designs sometimes have legal issues we would rather not flirt with. Unfortunately, this is the case with your artwork.

2) "lego" is a copyrighted word we can't use ."

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Can I resubmit this if I get rid of the word 'lego'/'LEGOlas'? Or the whole reference is a copyrighted issue?

This design was hard HARD work, i don't want to lose it. Sorry to bother you guys, i'm just so disappointed...

Hope someone of Threadless team read this and give me a light.

ditch the word legolas from the shirt. if you do that, some people might not understand who is on the horse, i know i wouldn't. So, what you should do is make more characters and have a mega-lego war, without ever telling anyone who it is or mentioning legos.

still, however, it seems they don't want any link to LOTR, so you might think of something else using the lego idea... it seems really clever, and you'd probably get away with just doing a medieval scene with legos.

'still, however, it seems they don't want any link to LOTR'

Yeah, you're right. =/

Thanks Snaggle tooth!

just do a big lego medieval scene! it'll be all good!

get rid of the text, people will understand the idea, and you won't have the copyright problem!, good design here

I agree, the text is awkward anyways. The image will probably look better without it.

oh man, it would look sick with some kind of map background, maybe belt-printed... maybe find an old map in public domain and try it out?

Looks good though, good luck getting past the copyright issues. Hope you can use the title - it's clever, and will make more sense for plenty of folks.

Man, sucks that it got declined. I understand why, and I still think you should submit it, even without the text. I really, really like this design!

Yeah, i agree with you guys. And if someone don't get the idea i'm sure the owner of the T-shirt will be happy to scream 'Did you get it? No? Man, are you kidding me? LEGO-LAS!'

:D

Yeah, LOTR haha cool.

critique mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/23917/Look_it_s_a_Water_Buffalo

i like the idea,

get rid of the type and its perfect for me!

I tried to submit this last week and get decline again on monday. I fixed it and submitted one more time and now i'm just waiting... *crossin fingers*

:)

I don't think you can submit the same thing twice.....however this is pretty good.

Crit mine plz.

Great!

Hey people, I submit this and it's ending in a few hours. Go and score it!

Thanks for the support!

I think it's a great time. A lot of work and really nicely presented. Excellent Job..

Please give me some feedback people : http://www.threadless.com/critique/24884/Fashion_Victim

It's perfect even without the type. Very hard work, you have to submit it again !!!! GO!!!

Please take a look: http://www.threadless.com/critique/24905/Peace_Off

lol. This is very cool. I'd say submit this. Plz critique my newbie http://www.threadless.com/critique/24906/Rayud_Nayuk

It's into the running, this is the last day! I have to change the title so, go and score it!

Go and score it!

on the snoopy thing, can i be honest with you? i think your design is much better and you should submit it. I really do... Im sorry if it looked like i was stealing your idea, im just trying to make mine look as good as yours without making it the same.

so i really am sorry, and i think you should definately submit yours.