This is a background for a band shirt.... also this is my first one. Please rate

Thank you

yo you should put something intresting around that...

try some colors!

Good start, plenty of potential.

photoshop s bein gayy on me... this isn t the version that i wanted to critique on...

should i use a different font ?

The font is cool, maybe try it underneath the design. Maybe on the first N break up the color more. Just use that brush tool once more so it doesn't look like a hair ball.

i noticed that :p thanks

please comment if you like the colors and if the slogan stands out enough

I prefer the first version, without the slogan.

playing with different colors ... pick best one