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v1 Precipitation Creation, current version








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icebar
icebar on Apr 08 '07
so... what do you think?

i know it's not very neatly done. don't tell me that lol.
Sound Ship
Sound Ship on Apr 08 '07
I would love to see a bunch of drops printed big on the shirt with all sorts of stuff in them. Maybe a few overlap and have pictures that connect inside.
icebar
icebar on Apr 08 '07
wonderful idea. i would expand on this now, but i have things to do. that will be explored later. thanks. :)
icebar
icebar on Apr 08 '07
i don't like the "don't submit" button. of course i'm not going to submit this now, people!! duhh. don't press it so much. what if i'm like a really good designer but this is just a rough draft. ...a really rough draft...? hmph. leave comments, rudies. [noun form for rude people]
icebar
icebar on Apr 08 '07
lol :-o how did you know about the circle and line thing?? jk

thank you :)
icebar
icebar on Apr 08 '07
goose bumps
ValerieChapstick
ValerieChapstick on Apr 08 '07
Beautiful idea. Keep working on it.
victimofopportunity
victimofopportunity on Apr 08 '07
the fish in green water is strange...
icebar
icebar on Apr 08 '07
victim i know, but i couldn't really find another way.. i know what you mean and i'll fix it though.



thank you valerie :)
icebar
icebar on Apr 08 '07
hey does anyone have any other title ideas?
2 days later
icebar
icebar on Apr 11 '07
let's have some more comments.
Kojima
   Kojima on Apr 11 '07
Try an isometric perspective. The head-on perspective is bland.
icebar
icebar on Apr 11 '07
thank you.



and btw i realize how boring this looks, and that's why people are telling me not to submit it. :)
The Wee Straggler
The Wee Straggler on Apr 11 '07
The concept seems to just be "stuff in raindrops", which to pull of would require a great bit of detail. Try focusing on designs that allow you to paint in the broad strokes you seem to enjoy using.
icebar
icebar on Apr 11 '07
k. thanks you're a big help :)
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