so... what do you think?

i know it's not very neatly done. don't tell me that lol.

I would love to see a bunch of drops printed big on the shirt with all sorts of stuff in them. Maybe a few overlap and have pictures that connect inside.

wonderful idea. i would expand on this now, but i have things to do. that will be explored later. thanks. :)

i don't like the "don't submit" button. of course i'm not going to submit this now, people!! duhh. don't press it so much. what if i'm like a really good designer but this is just a rough draft. ...a really rough draft...? hmph. leave comments, rudies. [noun form for rude people]

lol :-o how did you know about the circle and line thing?? jk

thank you :)

goose bumps

Beautiful idea. Keep working on it.

the fish in green water is strange...

victim i know, but i couldn't really find another way.. i know what you mean and i'll fix it though.



thank you valerie :)

hey does anyone have any other title ideas?

let's have some more comments.

Try an isometric perspective. The head-on perspective is bland.

thank you.



and btw i realize how boring this looks, and that's why people are telling me not to submit it. :)

The concept seems to just be "stuff in raindrops", which to pull of would require a great bit of detail. Try focusing on designs that allow you to paint in the broad strokes you seem to enjoy using.

k. thanks you're a big help :)