I'm not done with my design, right now I'm just deciding what else to add. I'm thinking of doing a whole ancient Egypt scene in which the papyrus will just be a minor detail. Any suggestions are welcome!

mucho awesomeness! I dig both versions.

My complements to the chef.

yeah i like this a lot, and i actually don't think you need a whole egyptian scene, simplicity is key sometimes. the one on the green shirt is sweet!

It's great as-is.

i like the red one better - the coloured one looks too much like word clip art for my liking. cool design!

are they paint brushes

I think you should submit this! It is super duper and you aren't too invested in it, so what do you have to lose?!