I accidentally deleted the critique for this design (I'd saved the comments, though), so I'm re-submitting the original, as well as a second version for comparison.

Second version, using some of the advice I got on the first one...

Anyone have any suggestions and comments at all?

the moon seems out of place. You should try to make it more simple and monocromatic like the pylons

Funny thing is, I tried to make it simple! If I make it all one colour, it'll just be a circle...

i think the moon is too perfectly in the middle of the shirt. i like the pylons a lot tho.

Thanks; I'm glad you like the pylons. I'm generally not a fan of symmetry, but I'm having trouble finding a better spot for the moon...

try khaki shirt with navy pylons, no moon make the design larger

it's looking good maybe a little clutted in the middle but looks good otherwise

preferred it without the moon to be honest

Have to say I also preferred it without the moon.

Damn, I've got half the people telling me the original version needs something more, and the other half preferring it without the moon. What to do...