It looks like a henna tattoo. I like the line work, but this design would not compel me to buy the shirt.

I as well love the design, but maybe not yet for a shirt.

The middle looks like a face, and is kind of distracting.



I'd love to see some background design in low opacity!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/20143/Popcorn_Parenting

it's stil a bit shy for a shirt

if you made this by hand: pretty good stuff!

Yes, by hand

There's no doubt you made it by hand. It looks cool, too. It simply doesn't suit the tshirt milieu, IMO.

When I first looked at it all I could see was what looked like a big smiley face with three chins. I didn't even notice the dragons. :(



I think it's too symmetrical and could benefit from some contrasting design and textures.

maybe make it a little bigger on the shirt too

Dragonstar is right, I originally designed this as a logo...thinking it I could leverage it for a shirt with little reworking...will resubmit