Threadless T-Shirts - Bartholomew J Sayonara

v1 Bartholomew J Sayonara, 77 days ago, click to expand

v1 Bartholomew J Sayonara, 77 days ago, click to hide

Work in progress by:

epocalypse
on May 09 '08

Version 1 - 77 days ago

Version 2 - 76 days ago

Version 3 - 71 days ago

epocalypse on May 09 '08

this is bartholomew j sayonara. i think its self explanatory.

i will probably sub this version soon.

thoughts?

epocalypse on May 09 '08

link to alternate colors on sayonara

pelesl on May 09 '08

Very nice. But can you explain how you counted the colors?

What about mine?

epocalypse on May 09 '08

1 blue
2 white
3 dark blue
4 gray
5 black thanks!

epocalypse on May 09 '08

do people prefer the alternate colors?

epocalypse on May 09 '08

should i add to it?

epocalypse on May 10 '08

anyone, please?

epocalypse on May 10 '08

... why don't you like the design?

DragonStar on May 10 '08

"i think its self explanatory."

It is not self explanatory to me. Can you explain it?

epocalypse on May 10 '08

true, i was in a rather disoriented state when i created this. give me a minute and i'll post the new version...

v2 Bartholomew J Sayonara, 76 days ago, click to expand

v2 Bartholomew J Sayonara, 76 days ago, click to hide

Work in progress by:

epocalypse
on May 10 '08

Version 1 - 77 days ago

Version 2 - 76 days ago

Version 3 - 71 days ago

epocalypse on May 10 '08

this shirt is about zoning out

DragonStar on May 10 '08

Okay, this is cooler.

epocalypse on May 10 '08

thanks

epocalypse on May 11 '08

okay, an idea of how it needs work would be helpful.

RWDiscord on May 11 '08

I don't get it and I think that's why I like this. Very cool don't change it.

epocalypse on May 12 '08

thanks! i hope other people agree, cause all in all that would be less work.

wigman on May 12 '08

hurm i prefer the simpler version of this design. the character just cute.

Z00gle on May 12 '08

Thats heaps better

Z00gle on May 12 '08

Please crtique

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19985/In_Da_Hood#v7

antiismist on May 12 '08

It looks alot better, I think the bg might be a bit too chaotic, it leads the eye in weird places. Well, more specifically behind the red guy there's the big set of concentric circles, then there are two banded circles that interfere with the concentric ones, they distract me, but the characters are nice looking.

Critique Mine?

epocalypse on May 12 '08

maybe, but i kind of feel that it works chaotic.

epocalypse on May 12 '08

wigman:

you've got a point about the characters, i was definitely going for the über cute thing. too

ps to all: please comment on the design if you think it needs work

CharlieArt on May 12 '08

I love it!! I think it might look cool a little smaller and in the bottom left of the shirt. Maybe try it out and see what you think? I'd buy. Good luck!

please critique me http://www.threadless.com/critique/20451/Human_Footprint

epocalypse on May 13 '08

Thanks! I like the idea of the placement change... might put that up soon...

epocalypse on May 13 '08

well i'm glad that submit is now tied with needs work at the top, but any more opinions on the design would be greatly appreciated.

epocalypse on May 13 '08

and how exactly does it need work?

deljani on May 13 '08

If my cock had epilepsy I would have just ejaculated.

epocalypse on May 13 '08

...thank you?

epocalypse on May 13 '08

i might just go ahead and sub this version in a day or two...

epocalypse on May 14 '08

não mais?

kaloman on May 14 '08

I like the characters!
I think the background would look better it you greyed it out a bit.
Close to how it is on the actual model, but keep the characters bright.
I think this would help to keep the chaos you like but bring it more to a design element and leave the emphasis on the characters.

epocalypse on May 14 '08

hmm, i can try it, but i'm almost out of inks... thanks for the comment kaloman!

jayrawz on May 14 '08

dope characters.. i like it

my critiques..

epocalypse on May 14 '08

Thanks!!

Madshadow on May 14 '08

I like it! I think the idea to dull out the background a bit is pretty good, as it achieves the chaotic idea without being "in your face". I like the size as it is, but thats just me.

Please no heather grey t shirt though :X

epocalypse on May 14 '08

thanks! what base color would you suggest?

Dallas. on May 14 '08

I like how it makes you zone out. Very optical-illusiony.

Mr. Raab on May 15 '08

I see red, I see blue, maybe you need a tiny bit of green to have all three colors of light in there. It would be kinda funny that you would have the 3 primary colors of light in such a dull colored background.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/20582/Mortal_Enemies

epocalypse on May 15 '08

interesing...

Electricsalmoon on May 15 '08

Actually, that's a fantastic idea Raab! Try it out Epo!

KassiAD on May 15 '08

Submit!!!

epocalypse on May 15 '08

okay, I'm going to try out this three color idea, maybe work on fading the background a bit, put that version up in critiques and than have people decide between the two versions. thanks to everyone for their suggestions so far!

khaag on May 15 '08

This is great. Very mezmerizing. High FIVE!
Crititque Mine?

epocalypse on May 15 '08

okay, the 3 color version is coming up, so tell me which of the two you prefer. thanks to raab for the idea.

v3 Bartholomew J Sayonara, current version

Work in progress by:

epocalypse
on May 15 '08

Version 1 - 77 days ago

Version 2 - 76 days ago

Version 3 - 71 days ago

epocalypse on May 15 '08

here we go! took in to account the suggestions of using some more muted bg colors, added in a third character for green, completing the primaries of light, and came up with a way to get all the colors i want by using metallic clear. its going to be either this version or version two, i think so tell me which of the two you prefer.

thanks for your time!

epocalypse on May 15 '08

version 2, the other competitor

epocalypse on May 15 '08

not sure if that link works, sorry.

epocalypse on May 15 '08

...any opinions on which is superior?

epocalypse on May 15 '08

one person for subbing it. Thanks!

epocalypse on May 16 '08

two for subbing! lets keep this going!!

Ninjapanda on May 16 '08

I AM LOVING THIS
V3 FTW
great job. Placement and size are perfect. I WANT IT NAO

Electricsalmoon on May 16 '08

Looks great. V3, Green guy pulls in a nice theme. One question: Did you try 'Green' up on the top left? Might draw the eye across the entire design. Seriously, nice work Epo! :)

epocalypse on May 16 '08

thanks a lot guys! I think this is going to be the one, the green indeed drawing just enough rhyme and reason to juxtapose the chaos.

Electricsalmoon: I did think about putting green where you suggest, but it caused a bit too much conflict in terms of perspective, which is why i decided on the current composition. it is a great suggestion though!

Electricsalmoon on May 16 '08

I figured you tried it :)

epocalypse on May 16 '08

epocalypse on May 17 '08

any more opinions? i might just sub this version soon.

epocalypse on May 17 '08

any more opinions? i might just sub this version soon.

Wozzy on May 17 '08

Its rather coool

epocalypse on May 17 '08

planning on subbing this design when i get back from new york on monday... any more comments?

BMJ on May 17 '08

submit submit submit! I love this

please critique mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/20474/Under_Repair#v2

epocalypse on May 18 '08

thanks!

frostdesigns on May 18 '08

really like the colour scheme

epocalypse on May 18 '08

thanks! i can't take complete credit though, it would not have been fully realized without this critique.

3obz on May 18 '08

I love the 3 coloured characters in this, but i really don't like the background. Most of it seems random and unnecessary.

frostdesigns on May 18 '08

like version one as well. if you get a chance please check mine out http://www.threadless.com/critique/20932/eye_flower

epocalypse on May 18 '08

i like the background personally, but how do other people feel about that?

epocalypse on May 18 '08

come tomorrow it may be sent out...

epocalypse on May 19 '08

9 to 2 to 1....

i think this is ready to sub, i might do it tonight or tomorrow, unless i find good reason to wait..

peace!

epocalypse on May 20 '08

this is the day! shall i sub it?

epocalypse on May 20 '08

sorry to do this again, but i'm putting it off a little while longer till one of my friends can have a look at it, but it'll going up soon.

kaloman on May 20 '08

Sub, V3.
I like the green guy, he looks like he is enjoying the chaos!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/21001/Ride_Your_Dreams

Julri on May 20 '08

How cute! I love it! Especially the little blue guy. :)

epocalypse on May 20 '08

thanks!!

BoxGirl on May 21 '08

woaaa submit!!! i rally like this, :P it remnids me megaman :P

if you want please be totally sincere but bee good ;) CRITIQUE MINE

epocalypse on May 21 '08

thanks! i definitely see what you mean with the megaman reference.

epocalypse on May 21 '08

thanks!

epocalypse on May 21 '08

subbing tomorrow(?)

2 days later

epocalypse on May 24 '08

sorry for the extended delays, i was in the hostpital yesterday (fine now though, but taking it easy) this is ready to go, I will sub it today or tomorrow with a different title (the one on the image) and post a link once available. peace

epocalypse on May 24 '08

heh, another needs work.

any suggestions how, then?

Mila_Gasud on May 24 '08

very cool!!
I would change only the green for a little bit darker one. ´Cause it´s not going so well with the blue and red tones.

other then that, i would wear it NOW!!!

Good luck, hope i´ve helped!!!

epocalypse on May 24 '08

Thanks! You most definitely did!

Mila_Gasud on May 24 '08

You´re welcome!!

Kookaberry on May 24 '08

Huh, at first I didn't like this at all but the more I keep staring at it the more I like it. I think maybe the background is a *wee* bit too busy. But don't get rid of it entirely.

epocalypse on May 24 '08

thanks! i'll consider that if i do a new version (that has been the biggest criticism) but so far this version has so much support I may just sub it.

jayrawz on May 25 '08

i say submit.. dont contemplate isolated opinions too hard.. the majority is wuts important.. i think its pretty dope..

critique mine?