This is my first design on threadless. I know it's simple and doesn't really have a "clever" angle, but I thought it could concieveably be something people would want to wear.

Maybe some shadowing would be nice.

please critique mine plz...



http://www.threadless.com/critique/19985/In_Da_Hood

Thanks, I would really love some more feedback on this design before I submit it.

anybody?

i think this is a really good start but i agree that some more shadowing might be the right touch :]

keep up the good work peter

Maybe you could lighten the outline on the outside of the petals.. I think it would be really pretty if it was attached to a branch or something as well..



I've made my first submission too, would you mind letting me know what you think?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/19869/the_turtle_goddess

actually, the picture i took for this from does have a bit of the branch too. I guess i should do that part too.

Maybe you could have something flying towards it from the other shoulder like a bee or something like that.





http://www.threadless.com/critique/19361/Hypno_vision

I think this is too plain?

Maybe you could add sth to it?





Critique Mine

I have to agree, it is a little plan.



It'd be neat to see something else there. Clouds, birds, bees, butterflies, more blossoms tiny in the background... Little bit of a punch. But I really like the blossom. It's pretty!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/19957/Just_Married

I think I see what you all mean. I just am not sure what to add to make it more interesting