This is my first design. I was trying to make a summer shirt that has a \"have a day\" feel to it.

The little guy is really cute, but I would get rid of the text. I think with the sun burn and ice cream you get the summer feel. Maybe give him more of a story...like a dog is sitting next to him licking off his ice cream

cool idea

Updated version with out text

What tan? I see no tan here. Very odd looking character, did you try it on different color tees?

This looked cooler as a thumbnail. The detail just isn't enough and it isn't clean enough to be this big.

Idea's cute. Made me smile. You need to clean up the drawing and add some detail to it.



Crit mine if you've got the time, thanks!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/24229/Make_me_a_robot

I like him...I wonder what he'd be like if he was the same "flavor" as his ice cream...mint chocolate chip...strawberry swirl..etc?



Could you critique mine? It's called Smorgasboard