We always knew they\'d be the first to turn.

haha clever idea. maybe lose the dark pink stroke? I don't know something just isn't clicking for me, I really like the idea though

The dark pink splatter on the face or on which part? and thanks :].

no i mean the dark outline around the tie, which is dubbed stroke in Photoshop, sorry about that.

haha thats cool
but i dont understand the pink splatter on the guys face

Okay in this version I got rid of the dark pink outline around the tie, as well as the pink splatter behind the hands and face. What do you guys think?

Nice, although it needs some more work.

I love the idea, but something about it tells me it needs more.

*Votes cool, but it needs work*

Maybe a slight distortion in the man being squeezed to show the effect?

And

something like the tie turning into or from a snake...

I definitely understand what you mean about needing more. So I added a background design, let me know what you think.

The first upload had a slight error.

What do you guys think about adding more ties in and making it have a "snake-like mouth"?

Any comments or suggestions?

I guess it sent in a blank screen the time before. Anyways, I've been playing around with the design, let me know what you think.

Anything?

I added a halftone to give a kind of "scaley" look to the tie-snake. How does it look overall?

It looks good on many colors, I only had room for a white. If you want to see more let me know! Otherwise, keep an eye on your ties.

I like it better when it didn't have the background. I do like the scales though. Maybe you could even put fangs on the snake?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19361/Hypno_vision

i agree, no background, add some fangs, and maybe add a few more coils around the man

Better or Worse haha?

And thanks for the feedback monroe20 and more.than.ordinary! I need all the help I can get.

If I had a better idea of how this would look on a shirt, I'd be able to understand it more. But for now, I would say that this looks very awkward to me. It tries a little hard.

Better! few things though, the head is an little disconnected from the last coil, and maybe add a tail? not sure how the tail will work, but it might make the blindfold a little less out of place. Overall an improved version

I decided I didn't really like the blindfold, and heres the placement on a shirt. What do you think? Also I fixed the misplaced snake head.

wow, v12. I like all the changes tho!
the face bugs me. . . he's being squeezed, but he looks asleep. . .
& I just realized. . . did you take a picture of a man standing then flipped it? Maybe it would work better if both his feet were facing us so it actually looks like he's on his side.
Really like the colors too! just maybe not on that color shirt you just changed it to.

Thanks for the comment, I'm going to fix the eyes and hands to make it look more appropriate for the squeezing haha. Thanks again.

Besides whats already listed above, are there any more suggestions? Shirt colors? Anything, let me know and I'll give it a try!

Okay, I made some of the suggested fixes/improvements. What do ya think?

I can't believe it's been 13 drafts! Obviously I'm always open to suggestions guys, if you want to see something just put it out there!

Looks good, hands are a tad thick though, but good job with the expression on the guy's face. :) It's turning out very nicely. I think you should work on the hands, and his shoes. If you have some extra time, making the snake look like it's actually being wrapped around him would be good too - it kind of looks like it's just 'on top' of the guy.

But nicely done so far! I'm excited for the final product. :)