Take a wonder and cast it into the clouds, signifying half way between logic and infinity. Components of two making one and the reaction of an electric spark creates us all.

I see potential in your idea.

But the drawing seems a little raw now?

Maybe you could change the shape of the face a litte?



Critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19622/Writer_s_Block#v2



Thanks.

To be honest, I also think you should redo the image. I really couldn't tell what was going on for a while, and after I got it I couldn't see if it's arms or a dick fondling with the plugholes. Also, I have seen the idea of a vagina as a socket a couple of times.

But I kinda like the roughness of the drawing, even though I am personally a cursed pedant!

Telling from the mass of chosen - mostly really clean and neatly polished, and thus very often boring- designs around here, I unfortunately think you'll have a hard time with this.

Maybe some words with it would come along well.

Keep it coming!

Cheers!

I agree with previous critiquers, you need to clean this up. Make line pressure on the lines, perhaps.



But I wouldn't say this is a shirt I would buy... :\