yeah you are right the design is a little heavy towards the tree will adjust thanks

Not sure about the butterflies being multiple colours what do you think should they be a single tone

I think it's a really lovely design. I'm thinking the color of the butterflies and the girl depends on the color the shirt would be. It should be a color that really makes those elements "pop".

Make the color of the kid different from the butterflies

I'd add a few more bills and make the person lying down a different color than the butterflies.

yeah add more money and i like the butterflies being purple but not so sure about the kid being purple. other than that, i like it!

I actually prefer the first one, I like how the kid is lying against the tree though the butterflies work well in the second one.

what do you think about mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22777/Mesmerize_Me

Hey guys thanks for all the invaluable advice I have put two new versions up to see what you thought of the monotone butterflies , what do you reckon. Thanks

i love the idea. but i think the butterflies don't fit in the concept. speaking of trees, what do you think about that

The design is supposed to embody the innocence of our minds as children, The full title should read 'If money grew on trees.... ...... What would you dream of?' But I know what you mean I don't know how to bring the design together