UNITY illustrated with unibrows. Thanks in advance for you help and advice. Cheers!

Overall this is a very cute design. I'm torn between asking for more detail and wanting to see it kept simple. I think a little more detail/personality on the faces wouldn't hurt.

Any thoughts on mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/19351/Rooftop_Terrace

I think the design is fine, no more work needed but it's not exactly something I would buy.

yeah I may try a version with more detail soon! Just to compare

Added more detail! Looking forward to your input

hahaha!
Please give one of them a handle bar mustache, pretty please...

oh and is it supposed to be darker in the center?

yes slightly darker in the center!

I handlebar mustache is a great idea! I cannot believe I did not think of that. Seriously!

uh, yeah ...
;)

soooo ... needs work voters? any insight to offer on what needs the work? I am sooo ready to improve this baby =)

Hey, I like the idea. The outer part of the design is grainy, or is that a texture? I'd clean it up. The 'Unity' part is cool, you should move the 'U' off the persons face. I actually liked V1 ALOT more. Use the paths from in the center of V1 and make them continuous from top to bottom. Maybe have the bushy brows unite all the way around the outer edge to pull this together? Like it.

http://threadless.com/critique/20431/F_K_SHARKS

Hey thanks for the input! WOW like V1 better huh? I wasn't expecting that ;) The grainy outer part is supposed to be the texture of the shirt!

ok made a few changes as far as the dark color background and some more detail work.! Thanks in advance for your help =)

here is a thought... I would like to see more of the thin black lines connecting them.

Also, for presentation.. I would take out the "cotton" background for this one. It seems a bit distracting.

I love this idea, I think it is almost there!

cool thanks

ok removed the cotton background, Thanks kaloman! Now i will work on beefing up the black line!

I'm liking this. I love the style of this art, and the guys beard dotting the "i" is a nice touch. One thing that is kind of bugging is the guy who is getting sucked in by the "y". I know that it is supposed to be his beard, but it looks a bit weird. That's it though. This concept looks like it is about ready.

I agree with Kornedog. Change the beard. I still think you should try to 'unite' all of the unibrows! Good design! :)

great thankyou! Very helpful advice! I am also thinkin of making the beard guy by the Y larger? thoughts?

oh and yes Electric, I am working on either uniting the eybrow or just making the connecting line a bit thicker!

oh and yes Electric, I am working on either uniting the eybrow or just making the connecting line a bit thicker!

lol, yay!!!! :)

ok fixed the guys beard to be less tangled, enlarged him too! United the unibrows! What do you fine threadless folks think?

the beard does look better, I say sub!

mmm, yes. I like it. I think it's ready.

cool thanks! anybody else got an opinion? aka I am scared to sub!

lol! I REALY liked the lines in V1 still! :) If you wanna keep messing with it.... Looks great!

OH yeah! Come take another look at mine!

SUBBED! Thanks all!

up! http://www.threadless.com/submission/163045/Unity

cool!

check out mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/20768/BombJackFrank