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v1 flute, current version








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wiryanata
wiryanata on Apr 04 '07
please say something
Karimi
Karimi on Apr 04 '07
Its nice for what it is, but its not a design I find appealing, I'm sure there are other people that like it though.
wiryanata
wiryanata on Apr 04 '07
help me to make it more appealing.

please :D
TatiMagritte
TatiMagritte on Apr 04 '07
Dont like the stars, the noy is nice but he seems sick in this colour...
TatiMagritte
TatiMagritte on Apr 04 '07
Maybe he could be playing for something maybe a dog or a cat or some dancing rats
Karimi
Karimi on Apr 04 '07
Well maybe change the stars a bit like Tati said. Also, give more of a relevance to his playing, create a setting so it tells a story.
Kojima
   Kojima on Apr 05 '07
Make the stars come out of the instrument in a stream. And make the stars less pre-set brushy.
vixyish
vixyish on Apr 05 '07
I agree with Kojima on both counts. The stars need to not be a photoshop brush.



Also smooth out the lines on the flute... and the line of the head is visible through the flute (which is only desirable if it's a glass flute, but then the rest would be transparent too.)
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