This answers the eternal question of why you put two socks in the wash and only one makes it into your dresser. It took the road less traveled...

That is a good poem.

I like this shirt much. I say submit.

Thank you!

Maybe add a few details of bricks on the pyramids, but other than that i saw sub. it!

G thats way too cute!
i want!

very simple clean cut and well over all great. nice. love the color. too many bland colored shirts lately i like how this one pops.

critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17666/The_World_Is_At_Your_Fingertips

haha, so true!
great concept.

this is wonderful! id say submit!!

brilliant concept

magnificent idea!

Thanks for the positive feedback guys. Don't forget to vote as well as write!

I love the design.

critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19197/Dem_Apples

Its a good concept. More detail in some of the little pictures would help. Also, I think there are too many loops in the dotted line, it makes the picture too sprawled out and busy. You might also make the dotted lines skinnier, or of some varied width. Varying the width of your lines can make the picture seem more dynamic and interesting.

I was really going for a Bill Keane kinda thing with the kid's crazy bouncing around (Family Circle style). But perhaps I can make them a little more 3D. I was going for a very simple style. Iconic even. Not a picture of a washing machine but the icon of one... like that. Thank you all so far for the feedback!

ha ha ha cool :D

look at mine?

I always did wonder where the other sock went....heheh
I'd say submit it.

great design answers a long term question

Coool and funny. I think I'd like it better if you pushed the lost sock to the right a bit, and added some detail on the pyramids but other than that its a go!

maybe add one more colour?
Not sure about the brown laundry machine or sofa...
Love everything else though, ESPECIALLY the Easter island reference!

Can anyone tell me what kind of detail on the pyramids? I wasn't sure how to do that since everything else pretty much doesn't have a level of detail like that. I am pushing the colors I think I have 5 right now but wasn't sure... how about a red sofa and washers? I was also thinking of moving the traveling sock and resulting journey down a little to distinguish it more from the other. But I wanted it to be lost between the washer and dryer (I am never sure where the damn things go and when) so I didn't want to move it over to the right too much. Thanks for the comments folks. I will post something with some changes soon.--Maureen

For the pyramids, make it like blocks, instead of just 1 large pyramid...Or does that not make sense? I'll try to rephrase..."Add detail by making the pyramid out of blocks". Better? I hope so.

good idea!!!

I like it how it is nice and simple.

http://www.threadless.com/profile/718507/JesseJames22/critiques

I dont know if it's been said but the shirt might look better if the road less traveled went alll the way around to the back of the shirt maybe?

Hooray! An answer to the eternal question.. I think this shirt is really lovely.. maybe make the pyramids slightly taller, they seem a bit too flattened, but other than that I can't find anything else to critique! :)

Would you mind critiquing mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/19869/the_turtle_goddess

thanks for everyone's feedback. I thought people were done looking at it a while ago, made some changes and have submitted it to threadless as a shirt for the contest. I haven't yet heard back from them. My submission is pending approval.
Maureen

and I would be happy to critique yours.