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buko
   buko on Apr 29 '08
thanks for your comments i made some changes with text i hope you like it
deepinatrance
deepinatrance on Apr 29 '08
submit!

check mine out?
faiz1984
faiz1984 on Apr 29 '08
good design...

mine
ladrones
   ladrones on Apr 29 '08
LOOKS GOOD
but does not read well

maybe other text
im not really digging
the word
skatetronaut


i think it may hurt your score,
because people who like the shirt wont like the word

possibly.

if your going to keep text, i think you should have
text that is more revlevent

but htast just me
209 days later
b r d mn17
b r d mn17 on Nov 24 '08
yea i agree with ladrones
i like the design but just change the font
Steelplate
Steelplate on Nov 24 '08
I'd lose the text and have the astronaut skating down off the shoulder... maybe make it a little bigger too.
Francesa
Francesa on Nov 24 '08
What he said.

This is good and fun, but the text spoils it.
jesstune
jesstune on Nov 24 '08
i agree about the font, but i like the word skateronaut. can you incorporate it into the design a little more seamlessly?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30760/pigeonatomy
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Mr. Crunchy
Mr. Crunchy on Dec 18 '08
I actually like the font and the placement of it on the shirt.
Skate-tron-aut. Sounds pretty cool.

Looks good.
07carlca
07carlca on Dec 19 '08
awesome!!

comment on mine please :]
i would love to have your input you seem like a great artist.
StevenTu
StevenTu on Dec 19 '08
I don't think it needs the text cos it doesn't really add to the meaning of the image. Otherwise great image... random concepts - woot :)

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InvincibleAgent
InvincibleAgent on Dec 19 '08
Just ditch the text.
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