What about left positioning? Would you center it? And what about background? Brown or fuschia?

It looks like you have cheerios and water in the bowl which makes no sense. So change the color of the liquid.

It just seems so bare, even though the bowl is pretty cute.

If you change the blue liquid to white, to be more like milk, you should change the bowl colour too, just so it's different. Centre it on the background. Brown is not a good colour for this design, it should be a cuter colour. Try the fuchsia, light blue would be nice too, if you change the liquid colour from blue.

I like it on brown but agree with changing the liquid and bowl colors.

Change the shirt and liquid color and it will be good. Keep it up!

Also, if you keep the speech bubble, you should probably go with a different font, or handwritten type.

I´ve changes colors of liquid from water to milk and background from brown to fuschia. It was bare so i´ve aplied little shadow ate liquid and bowl. Any other changes?

I think it's looking much better. The colours are heaps better and I think the text matches better too.

Hmm... I actually like the text better form the first version. Also I personally love this on fuschia, but maybe also have a version on the brown color you had before. Very cute.

Crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19180/Peaches

Ok! Now you can see the both bg colors to help me choose

Super cute! :D



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i love it!I'd go with both colours because I doubt a lot of guys would go for the pink one,but girls would.

Now, aplied on a photo

cute

its really cute but the only thing that bothers me is the size difference between the cheerios INSIDE the bowl and OUTSIDE the bowl :D

Very cute!



critique mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/19197/Dem_Apples

its cute..expect to get a lot of comments saying it shud be for childrens wear

its cute..expect to get a lot of comments saying it shud be for childrens wear

cute nice colors

Looks good. I kinda agree with the size of the cheerios outside the bowl but either way its good.

Yeah..i like it wery much and it looks funny.. I will give you 5..

Agree with rainbow_nonstop and felinedev.