buying some frogmen

lol thats funny
but i think the fish is too animated for the shirt

lol X) that is funny, though i agree i think the drawing of the fish doesn't really match the divers

yeah, you might be right, that the fish is a bit too cartoony....

changed the fish to a more realistic one....

what do you think? :-)

It's interesting :) I think the yellow contrasts a bit though. Maybe orange fish and white string?

Critique mine?

The fish looks much better! maybe even too good, heh i mean everything else seems vectorized except the fishy. I like this better than the version you already subbed because it's more exciting with different divers and the fish added. I think the light blue is a little harsh on this tee color.

The only thing that really bothers me though is the yellow string, it looks flat in comparison to the rest. Maybe you could use that grayish color for some shadow on it or going with a string that just wraps around the bag. Looking good though, this is almost ready to submit.

love yellow

good point from ericdiaz, that the fish was a bit "too good"
tried to make it more vectorized, but not cartoony.

and finally the yellow string..... gave it an orange shade, and used a darker blue behind the bag to give it more depth.

hope you like it :-)

I like this upgrade of the bag from your previous sub. It's got more context now.
The string really improved a lot

Looks great!

Fish looks a bit flat, but the idea/style is awesome!
Maybe some other tshirt colors?

ok,
will add some shade on the fish.... see if it works

which fish fits best?

ahhh much better :)
*thumbs up*

i personally like fish 1. fish 2 looks like it has wrinkles :)

I go for number 1 too
Fish 1 fits the style of the rest. Number two looks too sketchy.

1 for the home run.

This is great, clever concept and brilliant execution.

Fish 1 looks healthier.

I concur. The rest is so simple and clean, it’s what makes the work brilliant in a way. Go with the first fish.

Very awesome design. I like fish 1 as well.

Sub!

nice design...
fish no 1 is better...

minE

Fish one. Maybe tilt him a little bit. Submit!

looks it's 8-0 for the first fish :-)

fish one is the best,id so buy this!i love it!

final version :-)

Looks good!

heheh! Awsome idea, sub it!

critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/19180/Peaches

Sub it!


mine?

love it

thanx y'all!

you've got a great water effect going on there, but i have to ask, what ever happened to your oil container sub? did you gave up on it? =(

hey againstbound, that one will be up after this one i think :-)
waited a bit because i was way busy with other things.. thanx for noticing.

i shall post it in the critiques when the designs are up for the sub.

I like this final version. Would you be willing to critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/19458/The_Road_Less_Traveled

Fish looks great now!
Let us know when it's up for voting.

your divers are superior to mine haha.

whoot~! fish looks AWESOME
:)
great work *pats back*

i want it now

that is really cute, submit - maybe you could score mine? :)

just some shameless spam for my running sub right now :-)

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