i designed this shirt for a pirate party i went to, it was a big success with people saying \"why didnt you dress up you slack arse\" and others saying \"i love the shirt, very witty\"

Nice idea. I think it could be better but just don't quite know how. Maybe add something piratey - nothing big, possibly even just a skull and crossbones to the back? Or a big grinning skull underneath? Good luck!



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i like the ambiguity of it, so im not sure about adding piratey stuff to it.

This would be great at a pirate party, but not as funny walking around town. I agree with Kimicub about a skull and crossbones on the back. But it's your design and ultimately your decision.

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I love a good play on words tee! I think if you made one character to get your point across it would be much funnier. Like some crazy pie/rat character or combine all three: a pirate, a pie, and a rat. haha, furry pie with a rats head and tail, eye patch, peg leg, hook for hand, pirate hat with skull and cross bones, the works! Good luck on this one..

drastic changes, now a macaw and a chalk board.

so just tell me what you think. im thinking i might combine the 2, an actual pie-rat.

shouldn't the rat be in the pie? as is PI(rat)e ?

that's what i meant by "i might combine the 2, an actual pie-rat" i just thought i would up this and get peoples response and see if they like it.



and flywheel i gave you what you wanted, a back up to my decision including creative critique, as well as a valid reason most others didnt like it. i have a feeling you gave my one a do not print out of spite, but if you generaly do hate it with a passion could you please back up your decision further than "Just not for me"?

oh, and pirates and ninjas suck

First of all, ninjas dont suck. Second, the quality of the rat is

not as good as the pie. Add more thick lines to the rat instead

of him consisting of all of the same lines.



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