Threadless T-Shirts - Overgrown....

v1 Overgrown...., 164 days ago, click to expand

v2 Overgrown...., current version

Work in progress by:

drmtama2
on Apr 25 '08

Version 1 - 164 days ago

Version 2 - 164 days ago

drmtama2 on Apr 25 '08

this will be the final template.... ill be subbing this tomorrow leaving time for any comments or suggestions..

:)

EStatic on Apr 26 '08

I like colors and idea, maybe the tree is not enough defined in confront to the deer and the bird.

suggestions to me?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/19302/snails_are_kind

Kimicub on Apr 26 '08

Looks good to me. I was wondering if an extra colour should be added to the deer, nothing to take away from the bird but to at least distinquish it a bit from its antlers/tree branches. Good luck! :)

Critique Me?

joycewu on Apr 26 '08

The design is good, but I think you should do something about the big grey border around your model. It draws too much attention.
Critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/19180/Peaches

zombietag on Apr 26 '08

i like it. try some other color schemes too tho

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19095/Schematics_Truelifestlye

80 days later

MsJasmin on Jul 15 '08

I would define the branches a little more, maybe just a couple "leaves", less little twigs, but maybe one twig over the bird so that he isn't just floating on top of it.

drmtama2 on Jul 15 '08

i subbed this a while back.... maybe i should delete this critique already

:)

http://www.threadless.com/submission/161010/Overgrown

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