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v1 Overgrown...., 1491 days ago, click to expand
v2 Overgrown...., current version








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drmtama2
drmtama2 on Apr 25 '08
this will be the final template.... ill be subbing this tomorrow leaving time for any comments or suggestions..



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EStatic
EStatic on Apr 26 '08
I like colors and idea, maybe the tree is not enough defined in confront to the deer and the bird.



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/19302/snails_are_kind
Kimicub
Kimicub on Apr 26 '08
Looks good to me. I was wondering if an extra colour should be added to the deer, nothing to take away from the bird but to at least distinquish it a bit from its antlers/tree branches. Good luck! :)



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joycewu
joycewu on Apr 26 '08
The design is good, but I think you should do something about the big grey border around your model. It draws too much attention.

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/19180/Peaches
zombietag
zombietag on Apr 26 '08
i like it. try some other color schemes too tho





http://www.threadless.com/critique/19095/Schematics_Truelifestlye

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MsJasmin
MsJasmin on Jul 15 '08
I would define the branches a little more, maybe just a couple "leaves", less little twigs, but maybe one twig over the bird so that he isn't just floating on top of it.
drmtama2
drmtama2 on Jul 15 '08
i subbed this a while back.... maybe i should delete this critique already



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http://www.threadless.com/submission/161010/Overgrown
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