thats cute

why are they on wheels though?

thanks, they are toys :)

ohh i see :)

i thin it would be cute if they were holding tails like in a row



you know how elephants walk in groups? like trunk to tail

I like the concept but I also didn't get that they were toys at first. Perhaps if they had strings pulling to the side of the shirt. I like the illustrative quality but would love to see a bluer gray on them, also maybe a little shading under the ears. Aren't these toys the kind that have leather bits for ears? Maybe you could play with that idea? Good start.

What MoGoLounge said. :D

I think there are too many elephants. Also, you could add one of the smaller elephants using its trunk to hold onto a larger elephants tail. That makes it extra elephanty.

Cool concept. Needs a bit of work though.

thanks all!

they would resemble toys better if they were maybe wood grain or a bright color.. and wooden wheels



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if you clean up the lines a bit i bet it would do a lot better. interesting concept tho :)

maybe add a little sting to the last one so we can know they are toys? VERY CUTE



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