lol thats pretty awesome
try making the tv look 3-d

good idea, but needs more work
and try to make the resolution more crips in your template.

very solid idea, you just gotta make it work

Yeah i realize how fuzzy it was after i submitted it. Thanks though. Any other comments?

ahh thats funny ! :]
i like it

Anything i can do to improve?

its too high up on the shirt... and i agree with rainbow... try making it look 3D

A need help on a title. Anyone got any ideas?

I really like the idea, but i'm not sure about the execution. Why is the wire cut off on the bottom? I think the title is fine though.

Updated version. Tell me what you think.

Anyone?

I suggest looking at some "op art" for some good insperation for your screen. Also you might try making the chord on the tv more fluid like and not so rigid. Thanks for commenting on my design :)

Maybe try putting the design on another part of the shirt. Try to implement an optical illusion to it. I am not hypnotized by the twirl, so I guess that's the whole point to it?

I still enjoy it. I mean, the design.

It's supposed to represent how televison brainwashes people.

Yeah, I get it now. But the op art would make like really really good. But yeah, doing that is a little complicated. YOU CAN DO IT!

Thanks for the inspiration!

Ignore ver. 4

makes me dizzy. maybe make it bigger on the shirt? like the idea though.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19896/Sick_of_My_Job_2

it's supposed to make you dizzy! but i will try and make it bigger thanks mrdavenport.

I like the basic idea. I'd get rid of the red/green and stick to two color design. Maybe the silhouette of kids being hypnotized, in the shirt color, to help break up the block.

Also, I get these blank version pages any time I add a comment on the version sub. So I've bee posting image only then adding comments afterward.

I'll work on that. Thanks.

I also think it does fine without the back. The hypno TV is the ticket here.

you know what i think would be cool? If this was a guys head, and under the TV was the body of a man wearing a black suit with his arms folded. but maybe thats just me and my wacky imagination.

I like it, but imo ditch the back, makes the shirt overcomplicated. Possibly larger, and maybe more detail on the set?

I can't see it :(

Great:)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19963/Screw_This

you have to look at ver. 3 zipperneck.

I like it a lot. But since the antennae and the spiral isn't perfect, I'd make the TV a bit less geometric, too. What does the warning label on the back say?

What about mine?

It says caution electric shock can occur, but i might jsut get rid of the back all together from what people say.

improve tv shape
http://www.threadless.com/critique/19974/8_ball

Tell me what you think.

Gray or Nay?

i like the blue wayy better :] i'd buy it in pink
it contrasts the black and white on the tv

I think a brighter colored shirt might go better?
But besides that, interesting concept !
(:

I was thinking about a bright pink one, but i didn't know if it would be too much to look at with a bright t-shirt and the hypnotizing spiral. Do you think the pink would be good?

WHOA! This is so trippy! I love this!
I like the gray, it reminds me of white noise!

But I think something neon would REALLY hurt the eyes! But that's the point, so it would look good!
LOVE THIS!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19957/Just_Married

Oh, is this one still going to have the back of the TV on the back? I liked that idea :)

i dunno people said it was too much to have it on the back, but i might keep it.

I think I would have it as just one big swirl instead of a bunch of swirls its makes it a little too busy and takes away from the design a little. I like the idea though!

Interesting, i'll think about that. Anything else?

Oh and finally back or no back?

I like the blue a lot! I personally think it's strong with just the front, but a back might be cute if you want to give it a try.

I just clicked the other versions and saw the one with a back. :) My vote is for front only, cause I think the optical illusion is the strongest part.

Maybe u can improve the buttons on the tv, do it more 3d

nice design.. but the print is a little big for me.. but its good!

critique mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/20126/noodle_doodle

I like the idea, but think it needs more. Maybe some zobified viewer sillouettes in the front of it. I've also a problem with the hard square shape of it. No cathoid tubed television is quite that square.

Check out Mine!

it doesn't really look like a tv when you first look at it. maybe give some more definition. change the buttons and add a channel thing like the old school tv. and some better bunny ears.

Add a few more details to the TV, it looks a bit to simple as it is right now. I think the back would be a cool touch and it looks better on the gray. You are almost there, great design.

I appreciated your comments on my design. I've made some changes and would love to hear what you have to say.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/20105/aquarium_dreams

Smaller, on blue, and no back. Submit!

Check it out

Alright, not a lot of changes but tell me what you think.

Anyone?

maybe make the tv a more organic shape, more interesting and flowing, because it's a littl plain right now, but i like the concept a lot

i agree with the organic thing. right now, the tv looks just kind of stuck on but the organic shape might help or maybe add something else behind the tv.

perhaps you could make it so that the "hypno" design is breaking through the TV screen, that could be really cool

I don't get what you mean by organic. Should it be more roud instead of box-shaped? Thanks for the comments though!

Do Not Adjust Your Tee-V?

I'm not sure what is meant by "organic" either, but I think the edges could be rounded a bit, especially the shape of the screen. Maybe you could try to play up its sinister qualities a little? Curl the antennae like horns, maybe? Throw some stuff at the wall, you know?

Just some thoughts. :)

Maybe needs another element behind it, a shadow or a plug.

I like the idea of the plug. But I would keep it simple. Also with the background. Keep it simple. I would also round up the shape of the screen a little bit. For the rest, I like it very much.

Play around with line-weight, add some various line thicknesses to the TV's perimeter, maybe have one line really skinny and another one fat and drippy -

Just an idea.

It's improved a lot since the early stages.

i like the first one and it's spinny thing..... i don't really like it with multiple spinny things........ yeah i'm not quite sure what to call those things... so yeah spinny things...