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A really nice design. I'd like to see you fill in some more color and detail into the guitars I think that would elevate it to the next level.

Hey, heres a new version any feedback?

comments would be wicked

so far so good...i just hink you need a litel something else beside guitars

yea i agree, needs something else... but what? I thought about having little gnome like characters riding on the guitars.. hmm, i don't know. Any suggestions?

I think this is FANTASTIC!!! i don't see a need for change i say sub it!!! i would totally buy this as a tee or a print im sorrt as a tee AND a print!! well done!!

hey thanks! Yea i want to get it as good as possible before i submit it

well it might be over kill to the design if you add more but how about a cloud of picks with a hint of color prefrebly in another shade of brown or something like that?

yea i thought about using picks in some way, I'll give it a try

hmmm yea it is quite hard to add anything else without overpowering the guitars

did you do that with a 3d application? i dig it. i think color is your friend here, not gnomes. the color could probably stand to be less muted/monochromatic. placement may also play a part in the impact here but that's of lesser importance than color.

Help me figure out if my

eyes have it.

yep, in sketch up, then illustrator. I'll try colour

I have to agree with Streetlights - submit it as is. I really like the simplicity of the design. I like the color in the v2 image too. The only think I can think about would be to somehow convey your "Hard Rain" title to the print (besides just dropping in text, which would take away from it IMHO). Great work.

I like it as is. submit, no text added.

I really like the design, I'd buy it.

I don't think words would do any good, though some mild colours might help. Anyway a great idea!!

Another one with guitars:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/23562/choose_wisely

some additional color would be interesting to see.

nice one, i would like to see a joke, like electric guitars falling down over a grandpa with a "very" old guitar.... (excuse my english)