Right now from left to right there\'s:

-The creep posing as a nice, normal guy to meet women
-The geek that knows all there is to know about sites, hacks, cracks, online games, etc
-The Troll


I\'m stuck on the fourth character and background, any suggestions are appreciated

damn, i should have provided a closeup, the texture/shading is text, you can take a closer look in my blog

I really like this! The only issue I have is that the troll and the geek are a bit hard to distinguish without having read the description. At first viewing, I thought it was just showing things you could do with a computer (typing, web cam, music) but thats just me. I really like the colors and the overall drawing however.

Maybe someone taking their own MySpace photo?

thanks mad =) i'm aware that the message might not be delivered at first sight to everyone, i'm hoping that the artwork can compensate that, though experience has proved the opposite, i'm thinking this will score below 2 like my last subs

auxocrome- thanks for the suggestion, but i'm not sure that's interesting enough, besides this is supposed to be showing some of the stereotypes you find in chats/blogs, not so much myspace, thanks nonetheless

3 submits! is this opposie day? ;(

I like it tons!

thanks grace =D though i'm currently stuck on this and i'm not sure if i'll be able to finish and sub it

i reaaaaally like this. submit!

thanks mr snaps,but i really want to add a fourth character and/or at least a background, and i'm completely blocked :/

I like this as is, but if you want to add a fourth character, what about one of those "sex bots" that one always encounters in aim chatrooms. The ones that just keep pasting the same message about their webcam and such.

As far as a background goes, I think it could do without. Unless it was a really minimal background, I feel it would take away from the drawing.

yeah for the backgorund it might be something like i used in my last sub that scored pretty bad , but i still have to figure it out properly, i want something more or less i that style but not exactly the same

bump for more suggestions and non-suggestions

What is your reason for having a fourth character? because i like it with three.

well, yesterday after hours of frustration i think i quit on the fourth, but i satill want some sort of backgorund or other element in it, i already have something sketched but it might not work like my first idea, and you never know, someone might just hit the spot, even if accidentaly, has happened before

bump for knight in shining armore to gie me a genius background idea

I don't think I'd ad a background image...and if you do, I'd keep it black outlined somethings...I really like the colors you've used and I think anything other than black/grays in the background would take away.

goodnight

Why not a line only, it will add depth, but not actually change the look of it to much. As you can see people like it like this.

WOW
love it
subtmit t please

lonneke, i might sub this as is if i just can't come up with anything decent =)

wozzy, thanks =)

no knight in shining armor? u_u

really nice

Almost the same as v1, just fixed and tweaked a little the screen area and i think the lower placement looks better

If i don't have a genius idea this weekend i think i'll sub it as is on monday

=O

i like the concept alot (: i think maybe missing a little something though :/ hmm sorry i can't be of more help though, not particularly my style.

i know, i feel exactly like that :/

see i really like it to but i agree..
the colours and characters are great so its not that
maybe the concept needs something
OR
background
but then that would distract from the characters themself which are brilliant..

probably th last bump before i sub

Hey ! Just submit it !
I like it !(:

Perhaps a person facing the computer screen with the 3 popping out at/around him?

thanks fiftynote, i might just do that

guards-i think that would make it too busy, and i SUCK at drawing peopl, but thanks for your feedback

makes me not want to chat
it's creepy
but creative, don't get me wrong
could very well be true

not everyone is here for the cuteness ;)

Better or worse?

i feel the distance between the characters and the screen is now a little too far, and the computer should be slightly larger maybe.

tho i prefer the direction this adds to it.

i prefer v2 a lot more than this.

bettar

I'd like the characters to be bigger, so then if You want to keep the distance, maybe try a wrap around. That way it's also a bit of a surprise where they come from......

version 2, but computer approx. below the keyboard.

The opinion seems pretty divided on this, and I'm very unsure baout which i prefer, maybe i'll try to make it somewhat between v2 and v3

Thanks for feedback so far =D

I like V2 best, but it is a close call between V2 and V3

Meh, it's not working as i want, i think i'm only going for v2l with higher placement and gei it over with

both versions are great but i would probably choose v2 and yes, higher placement

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19764/Blown_Away

It's subbed

Thanks to everyone for feedback and support =D