"critique me" says the sub

i really like it, the woodgrain is cool... i just am afraid it won't score well here but i can't place exactly why

Thanks for the support skaw. I agree it probably wont socre well. probably a little too gruesome for threadless buyers, I just wanted to see if I could make it look realistic

so for the people who said "needs work"... does that mean it needs more blood or that it needs something else to tell the story a little better? i was thinking of adding arm restraints to the chair

It needs to be more gritty, definitely. The style is far too clean for the subject matter, and there needs to be major contrast in the wood grain. Right now, it's hard to see a bit.



Of course more blood, but what I'd personally love is to see a severed ear next to the chair.



Always love a good reference.

whoa, wait



is that a finger behind the chair leg?



or am i imagining things haha?

And the brick wall is at the wrong angle. It shouldn't be perfectly flat like it is.

victim - yes it is.



skipper - thanks for the suggestions. as for the wall, i imagined the perspective was looking straight at a flat wall, but i dont know if i made the other objects accordingly...

It is really great - reminds me of my boarding school experience - So don't let my critique soil an already swell design that I would give a 5 too



If it were to be improved on i would say:

Darker shirt - bring the mood to the sinister arena

it will also make your swell looking brick wall standout a little more

Try more of a mahogany wood colors (darker browns and reds)

and finally... playing on your title maybe add one more element on the floor, like a dead fish or clown shoes or something completely odd that will make us all think WTF happened here!

thanks for the thorough critique cap'n :)



an explanation of the title...



I've been watching the sopranos a lot lately and whenever something really bloody and unexpected goes on, someone walks into the room and says something to the effect of "what the fuck happened here?" So I imagined this scene is something about of the sopranos or reservoir dogs or some other gruesome torture scene.



I picked white as my initial color scheme because i wanted to contrast the darkness of the themes with the light, crispness of the design. i think it will work better if i grunge it up a little more and put it on a dark gray as skipper and captain have suggested. thanks for all the suggestions guys, ill be putting up a new version within the next couple days

Alternate color scheme

wow - looks great

i think im going to dull down the color of the chair a little and have a little less contrast between the wood color and the grain color

I'd darken the blood...against the dark shirt it looks kind of neonish.

agreed

the dark looks alot better! how bout some ducktape on the chair arms and leg or rope?

for some reason it didn't get my message I put with the third version... I'm going to try adding arm restraints and then i think it may be done

I think this is the final version, what do you guys think?

thats nice! not sure I like the darker wood, but looks great either way.

i decided the other wood was a little too bright for the look im going for, i wanted a subtleness to the contrast

put some highlights and you're good to go. very nice!

i dont have any colors for highlights :\

then maybe make the shadows and grain on chair a lil darker.

good call. when i added the light on the floor i guess i made the contrast for the whole image higher. i'll change the color real quick

ok, FINAL VERSION!

thank you for the help everyone, i think this is my best sub yet

Make the wall in the same perspective as the chair.

ot works very nicely on a shirt - great job

yeah ... this is spot on .. ace ... dialed in ... cats meow .. fan-tas-tic .. etc.

Yep I think that's working!

I changed the wall a bit as seen here..



http://www.disinformationco.com/images/whathappenedv2.gif

I think it's strange there is no blood on the chair itself... I can't think of what might have happened that kept the chair completely clean.

they wiped it down of course

They wiped it down but didn't take the baseball bat away? :P

they wiped down the chair but they need to leave the basball bat for the next person they need to torture!

Oh, ok