No major concept here, just based on a piece of my \"light graffiti\" photography.

I guess its kinda \"Nu-Rave\" with the tee colours.

no constructive criticism at all? :0(

any suggestions to improve this?

any suggestions to improve this would be gratefully received!

id make it go further down the shirt. its kind of simple so the more room it takes up the better

if u have the time
http://www.threadless.com/critique/19283/Keep_Out

interesting...i didnt want to overload the shirt with ink, but ill give it a try.

do you think i should develop a theme around it, or concentrate more on the image?

less of the pattern and more of the light graffiti....
the grey and black dots look pretty cheap....compared to the complexity of the photography details

cheers....i may try and use more of the original photo then.

i definately think you should try to use the original shapes rather than the digitally created ones....and then maybe adapt them to the shape you want on the shirts shoulder....i hope that made some sense..

from a distance it looks good, slmost like tyre tracks over the shoulder.

yeah that makes sense.

I do like the tyre track look too...but I have just stumble across a different option when playing around with it just there. gonna upload it in a few minutes.

This is back to the original image I based the first version on, I don't know if it is even possible going full shirt, or if it is too much of a departure from version 1.

I reckon this version is a bit more interesting than the full shirt idea.

any comments anyone?

bump de bump

i like it on the pink shirt
but i think the design is too big?^^;;

yeah gettin better with every attempt mate!

i like the pink version...dont think its the threadless type, but keep workin at it.

Normallt threadless tshirts need a joke or a meaning, or something a bit funny...... plenty of other places to go though!

maybe experiment with making the spots smaller and the light escaping the boundaries??

cheers guys...yeah i like the idea of smaller circles, i did keep making them smaller and smaller as i was doing it.

i wonder if i go even smaller and had them breaking away at the edges, or falling off or something, so it isn't so square/ regimented.

then i could make it smaller either coming in from the side or shoulder, or just centred.


do you think i should introduce a theme, or would that be too forced?!

try backing down the background and MAYBE add a theme?
if it doesnt work out, you can always go back to the non-theme design

what do you mean about backing down the background? i dont follow. :0|

Added smaller circles, fading away. Still not sure whether to introduce a theme or not.

*bump*

Maybe have them fading away a little lower in the shirt, and keep the graffiti going after the circles have faded away.

Maybe makes the circles fade away all the way around.

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Could you comment on my design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19053/Sleeping_Polar_Bear

ok i really like this a lot a lot but i think the circles should get smaller as it goes up, but only like towards the top. and maybe a pink shirt and like a lightning blue one too. but i really like it. the version particularly.

ps...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19095/Schematics_Truelifestlye

Ok, I finally got round to doing the changes on this one.

Made it fade away all the way round, and added it on a turquoise blue tshirt.

I tried out larger circles going to smaller ones, but I didn't like how it looked.

Any thoughts?

bump

any further comments on this design before I submit it?

Nice!

i like it a lot

http://www.threadless.com/critique/20380/French_Fry

thanks!

Gutted, this was just denied by Threadless, any tips on how to improve, or shall I call time on this one and start a fresh?

What reasons did they give? I quite like this! Such a shame...

Please take a peek at mine!

they said it could do with a little more work, and told me about the critique feature of the site. cos you know I hadn't heard of the critique section!

a little boring for me sorry

so no tips on how to improve it then?