the raccoon saw the sign and went off to steal some clothes so he could get some coffee.

i'll put in a storefront or something later. this is just a developing idea.

heh





it needs to be developed a bunch more but it's a nice start

I like the idea, but it does need more details!

I am sorry but I think this one cannot be saved, the bleeding is profuse and it's going into shock.

uhhuh well thanks guys.

i of course did this in appleworks without sketching it out or anything.

i'm dying to get some better supplies for designing so i can continue withe my plentitude of wonderful ideas haha.

captain critique, you're funny

I aim to serve darlin

*scolds self*

the grass looks terrible and the shoes need to be bigger if the point is to be made that they were borrowed from a human.



now you try.

It looks like clipart. If your intentions are to actually draw this idea and redesign it, cute idea! If you plan on adding onto this.... hmmmm. Needs a lot of work with detail, shading etc...

The idea is very good, but you should do this in a vector program.

thanks people. :)

i agree about the need for better graphics, plus i think he should be standing up ... i don't really know why, but i think it would make it a lot better.