My first ever attempt at a tee design. It\'s based on a painting of mine....based on the idea of a little death.

Any comments on the concept itself or even colours/fonts would be greatly appreciated.

This is very much a first draft, so any feedback at all would be great.

Thanks in advance!

Either make the rainbow colors all the same width or majorly different - they look like a mistake right now. I don't really get the concept either.

the concept is my attempt at symbolising this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_little_death

I dont suppose everyone willknow what it is straight away, and that swhat I kinda liked.

As for the rainbow, the orange line is a mistake , it must have moved when I was saving it.

FYI - a "little death" or La petit mort is a term that historically refers to a woman's orgasm.

*petite

rainbows. black flames. an orgasm. whats not to love

yeah, i never suggested it was my orgasm...i just liked the image

what if i removed the words and worked on the image alone?

I like the orgasm, keep it.

I love it

ok thanks everyone, I think I will have a go at a 2nd version.

Ok this is a wee bit of a departure. What say you?

any tips on how to improve this one? :0)

not sure on the text

sonny, i was in da war, i dont see no death here. dont tell me there's some death SHOW ME the death, baby! show me all kinds of crazy death shit going on up in dis biaotch. yeah.

but for real this time, i think more graphic showing what death there might be and less and smaller text telling that there is death, if that makes sense.

yeah i see your point. ta very much. :0)