Wow! Bizarre! I'd like to see this design on coloured shirts. The black on white looks a little plain.



Critique mine too?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19010/Butterflies_Instead

Thanks for the input, everyone! I've been thinking about color...but I'm not sure what to do with it. Should it be colored lines? Should she have solid colors filling her out? And if anybody else would like to tell me why this might not be threadless style, I'd really like to know why...rather than it just, "isn't".

Oh! shirt colors? Black and white cuts it for me...so I don't really know what shades would bring it out.

Diffrent Color shirt please. I'm not sure what would look good. Just try a few.

Haha! If someone insults her and you tell her your name as you sail away, Poseidon may flip your ship.



(The Odyssey reference)

I was thinking of doing some blocky/undefined color strokes behind the picture... yes? no? other options that might look good for this picture?

Thank you!

you should put colors to the design...

it will be great!



miNe

I don't like the composition and I think the colours would make it better