just trying to get home...



like always any and all comments and or suggestions welcomed...



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I don't know how I feel about the word 'home' being the orange color. Have you tried it white?

Otherwise, I think its an extremely clever design.

i wanted to accent "HOME" but if not needed i could change it... no problem..



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I've seen different ones???

I agree with previous posts that the scotch isn't identifiably scotch -- right now it looks like orange juice. I'd also clean up some of the noise surrounding the hopscotch court.



If you wouldn't mind, I'd appreciate a critique too.

what color would you suggest???

... i am planning on changing "HOME" back to white the way i originally had it... but what is a solid color that i could use for the Scotch??

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make the scotch darker. i think its too bright

Maybe bring it down a bit on the placement.

Add a couple of pieces of sidewalk chalk thrown on the ground with the skotch bottles. Also, make the scotch bottle to the right look a little more defined. It looks kind of flat like one of those hot water bottle things they used in the olden days.

I just realized why....the highlight line on the inside of the bottle goes all the way around the inside...rather than making it look 3d, it makes it look flattened. Hope that makes sense.

:) its a good image

Your scotch bottle looks considerably more scotch-like in this version. I'm going to suggest making the other bottle have the same shape -- it looks a lot like a wine bottle right now. I also think it should be lower on the shirt.



Mind giving mine a critique?

it does kind of look like a wine bottle, but not so much that the idea is lost. maybe put the flask bottle in one of the squares, like its the marker....?

i'd put a scotch glass next to the bottle, that would help.



you could also try some association as well. Maybe make the label face us and put the Cross of st. Andrew on it. If that still doesn't help, you could try a simplified Scottish plaid on the label.

Excellent sketch... maybe you don't need two bottles and only the square one is enough... And maybe make the scotch even darker... GREAT IDEA !!!



Pls take a look: http://www.threadless.com/critique/24905/Peace_Off

Haha, i like this, but i would make the scotch darker.



I edited my "Got mirror design" Mind taking a look?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24426/Got_Mirror

Haha, great play on words, here. I also enjoy the artwork.

I think adding some guy passed out on the other end of the hopscotch... feild? would be fitting- it would display the consequences of drinking and hopping.

I would agree with everyone else here on making the scotch darker, and the one bottle the same shape.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/24881/Strength_among_others